Question

17．假设你是英国伦敦的Allan，前几天你参加了一家旅行社组织的哈尔滨三日游的活动．下面是这家旅行社的广告，请根据下面广告中箭头所指内容对其不实之处向消费者协会写一封投诉信．

注意：1．词数100词左右；信的格式和开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to express my complaint about the service of Morning Star Travel Agency．
             ．
Yours faithfully，
Allan．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封投诉信．
写作要点为：1，食物里有沙子；2，车子太破，没有冷气；3，冷的洗澡水；3，强制购物；4，两个景点没有去看．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I'm writing to express my complaint about the service of Morning Star Travel Agency．
       A few days ago，I joined a three-day trip to Harbin with this travel agency．I found a big difference between their ads and action．
       As they say，they provide large air-conditioned bus，but we only rode in a shabby bus without any air-conditioning．Yes，they served us lunch，but the food tasted terrible，some even with sand．We didn't enjoy any kind of shower； we only bathed in cold water．As for sightseeing，the guides led us to several expensive souvenir shops，which wasted us much time．As a result，two scenery spots were left unseen in the end．
       We do hope something can be done to prevent such things happening again．
Yours sincerely，
Allan

点评 考生需注意书信格式．考生需根据所给的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．