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7.假如你是某校学生李华,马年到来之际,你的美国朋友Tom来信祝你快乐,并请你谈谈中国人对马的认识,请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信:
1.马在生活中的作用,如:在交通、农业方面;
2.马的优良品质,如:活力、毅力、智慧等;
3.表达你对Tom的祝福,并询问美国人对马的认识.
注意:1.词数120-150;开头、结尾已给出,不计入词数.
2.可以适当发挥,以使内容充实、行文连贯.
3.参考词汇:马年the Year of the Horse;vigor活力;persistence毅力
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter and greetings.
      .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

分析 本文为一篇提纲类书信的写作.文中需要表达的观点比较清晰,只要按照所罗列的要点将相关内容表达清楚即可,注意其中过渡句的使用和相关句式的变换运用.写作时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第三人称.
重要短语:
play a role in在…中起作用;First of all首先;What's more而且;At last最后;Therefore因此;such as比如;By the way顺便问一下.
高分句型:.
1.Therefore,the horse often appears in Chinese idioms,such as qianlima,which means a talented person.本句中含有一个which引导的非限制性定语从句,其先行词为qianlima.
2.Since the horse is honored as a symbol of vigor,loyalty,persistence and intelligence,people born in the Year of the Horse are said to share such good qualities.这是一个since引导的原因状语从句,主句中的主语people后面有一个过去分词短语born in the Year of the Horse作后置定语;该句式people born in the Year of the Horse are said to share such good qualities相当于It is said that people born in the Year of the Horse share such good qualities.

解答 This year,it is the Year of the Horse.Now I want to tell you something about the horse in china.(写信目的)
The horse plays an important role in our daily life.First of all,they are useful and can help people do many things as a means of transport and a plow of fields.In the past,they helped to carry heavy goods and helped people to travel from a place to another.
What's more,the horse is a kind of friendly animal.They are kind and tame.Therefore,the horse often appears in Chinese idioms,such as qianlima,which means a talented person.(高分句型)Since the horse is honored as a symbol of vigor,loyalty,persistence and intelligence,people born in the Year of the Horse are said to share such good qualities.(高分句型)(介绍知识)
 At last,best wishes for you in the New Year.By the way,would you like to share the opinions on the horse in America?(表达希望)
Look forward to your reply.

点评 本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇和句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

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