题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom,来信询问关于你的英语老师的情况。请你按照下列提示用英语写一封回信,介绍你的英语老师。
姓 名 | 王 梅 | 性 别 | 女 |
第一印象 | 热情洋溢,精力充沛 | ||
授课特点 | 清楚条理,严肃耐心 | ||
师生关系 | 严格、热心、友好、融洽 | ||
你的评价 | 良师益友…… | ||
注意:1. 不得简单翻译所给提示;
2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 词数120左右。开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
You’ve asked about my English teacher in your letter, and I’m writing to tell you about her. ____________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
You’ve asked about my English teacher in your letter, and I’m writing to tell you about her.
My English teacher is called Wang Mei. My first impression of Mrs Wang was that she was a beautiful young lady, enthusiastic and energetic. Now I also know that she is really good at teaching. She explains everything clearly and teaches in an organized way. She is always serious and patient with us, especially when we make mistakes. Although Mrs Wang is strict with us, we get along very well with each other. That’s because she is very kind and friendly to us. She often encourages us to work hard and is ready to offer help to us. She is considered not only a good teacher but also our best friend. We all love and respect her a lot.
Such is Mrs Wang, my English teacher.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求写回信,是应用文的范围。注意条理要清晰,逻辑顺序和结构要恰当,同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容,不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息,不可偏题,应用文写作对于文章内容的要求是要达到写作目的。尽量保持卷面整洁,字体美观,注意行文的连贯性。
【亮点说明】不看已经写好的句子。第二段第二句是一个表语从句 My first impression of Mrs Wang was that she was a beautiful young lady, enthusiastic and energetic. 我对于王老师的第一印象是她是一位美丽的、热情的并且有活力的女士。第三句Now I also know that she is really good at teaching是一个宾语从句。现在我也知道她真的很擅长教学。第五句是一个when引导的时间状语从句She is always serious and patient with us, especially when we make mistakes. 她对待我们总是严肃又有耐心,尤其是当我们犯错的时候。文中第六句是一个although引导的让步状语从句 Although Mrs Wang is strict with us, we get along very well with each other. 尽管王老师对很严格,我们之间还是相处的非常好。正文最后一句是such提前的部分倒装句Such is Mrs Wang, my English teacher.这就是我们英语老师,王老师。本文除了用了一些从句之外还用了许多比较好的结构和短语。Be good at擅长做某事;be strict with对…很严格;consider(as)认为;not only…but also不仅…而且。等等文章覆盖了题目中的所有要点,是一篇比较完整的作文。