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8．Through the wonders of modern technology，our world is more connected than ever before．Ideas can cross oceans with the click of a button．Companies can do business and compete with companies across the globe．And we can text，email，Skype with people on every continent．
So studying abroad isn't just a fun way to spend a semester； it is quickly becoming the key to success in our global economy．Because getting ahead in today's work places isn't just about getting good grades or test scores in school，which are important．It's also about having real experience with the world beyond your borders--experience with languages，cultures and societies very different from your own．Or，as the Chinese saying goes："It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books．"
But let's be clear，studying abroad is about so much more than improving your own future．It's also about shaping the future of your countries and of the world we all share．Because when it comes to the defining challenges of our time--whether it's climate change or economic opportunity or the spread of nuclear weapons--these are shared challenges．And no one country can confront them alone．The only way forward is together．
（Adapted from US First Lady Michelle's speech in Peking University）
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；
2．然后以约120个词谈谈你对"读万卷书，不如行万里路"的看法，内容包括：
（1）你如何理解这一说法？
（2）你是否认同这种说法？为什么？
（3）针对这一说法，作为中学生，你会怎么做？

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 时态用一般现在时．人称用第一和第三人称． 重要短语：experience sth （体验，经历某事），benefit sb/sth（对某人/物有益），make a speech（作演讲），highlight sth（强调，突出某事），be for…（赞成…），gain knowledge（获得知识），put sth into practice （付诸实施），be different from（与…不同），contact sb（持有一个正确的态度），acquire sth （获得…），live a better life（过更好的生活）．
【高分句型一】
1．In the modern world with a closer link，①to experience different cultures and societies is②what studying abroad is more about，③which may benefit both the individual's future and the future of the country．
①此处是"动词不定式（to do）"作主语．
②此处是由连接代词"what"引导的表语从句．
③此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
【高分句型二】
2．This saying highlights the importance of traveling，①which means ②if one wants to understand people and the world profoundly，traveling is a better way than just reading books directly．
①此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
②此处是宾语从句中又含有"if"条件状语从句，主句为"traveling is a better way than just reading books directly"．
【高分句型三】
3．I am strongly for this idea，which is really meaningful and helpful to us．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
【高分句型四】
4．Not until we experience in person do we realize that the world is not as pure and simple as we think．
此处是由部分倒装结构，结构为"Not until+句子/时间副词+一般疑问句形式"，意为"直到…才…"．
【高分句型五】
5．we can travel to other places personally，contacting different people，experiencing various cultures，learning different languages．
此处为现在分词短语作伴随状语，主句为"we can travel to other places personally"，主句的主语与动词"contact，experience"构成逻辑上的主动关系．

解答 In the modern world with a closer link，to experience different cultures and societies is what studying abroad is more about，which may benefit both the individual's future and the future of the country．【高分句型一】（概括）
In her speech made in Peking University，Michelle mentioned a famous Chinese saying："It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books．"This saying highlights the importance of traveling，which means if one wants to understand people and the world profoundly，traveling is a better way than just reading books directly．【高分句型二】（如何理解这一说法）
I am strongly for this idea，which is really meaningful and helpful to us．【高分句型三】As we know，we gain knowledge from books，and put them into practice finally．Yet most of time，we find that the knowledge of the book is quite different from that of reality．Traveling can tell us the truth，helping us learn the world more clearly．Sometimes，what the books tell us is rather idealized．Not until we experience in person do we realize that the world is not as pure and simple as we think．【高分句型四】（赞同这一说法及原因）
As students，we of course should read as much as we can，but meanwhile if possible，we can travel to other places personally，contacting different people，experiencing various cultures，learning different languages．【高分句型五】These may not be acquired by reading，but can help us understand the world better and live a better life in the future．（个人观点：针对这一说法，作为中学生，该怎么做）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．