Question

在一次课堂讨论中，大家对朋友和友谊进行了讨论。请根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你对友谊的看法。

为什么需要朋友	有许多问题靠自己无法解决，要靠朋友帮助； 2、可与朋友分享快乐、分担忧愁，少受寂寞。
什么是真正的朋友和友谊	1、敬重你而你也敬重的人； 2、在你需要他的时候绝不离开你； 3、牺牲自己的利益，给你真诚和无私的帮助； 4、鼓励你坚持正确的东西，少犯些错误。
你对友谊的看法	（自由发挥）

注意：1、短文必须包括所有要点；2、词数150左右；3、短文开头已写好，不计入总词数。

Answer 1

One possible version：

In life we can hardly do without friends. There are many difficulties and problems we can’t overcome with only our own efforts. Besides, we need friends to share our joys and sorrows, otherwise we will feel lonely.

What is true friendship? A good friend is someone who respects you and who you respect. As the saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” True friends are those who never desert you when you are in need. On the contrary, they will offer you sincere and selfless help even at the cost of their own interests. Moreover, they will encourage you to stick to what is right and tell us not to do what is wrong or illegal.

In my opinion, true friendship is largely based on supporting each other. Whenever we have problems, we never hesitate to offer support to each other. Besides, we are supposed to help and trust each other. In conclusion, true friendship will stand the test of time.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类作文。要求写一篇有关朋友和友谊的作文。文章最好用三段式作文。第一段，写我们为什么需要朋友。文章应该根据给出的两个论点来写。第二段，什么是真正的朋友和友谊。可以根据文章给的四个论点来写。第三段，写你自己对于友谊的看法，这一点考生可自由发挥，一般在两到三点左右。文章的条理十分清楚，可按照顺序逐一展开话题。文章应以一般现在时为主。写作时要充分发挥想象，以使文章内容丰满，并且要达到要求的字数。此外，还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇来提高文章档次。最后要注意要正确使用连接词，使文章通顺连贯。

【亮点说明】 本文最大的亮点是文章的衔接以及复合句的使用。文章衔接方面，文章使用了如besides，as the saying goes，on the contrary，moreover，in conclusion等，是的文章过渡自然，连贯性更强。文章第二段A good friend is someone who respects you and who you respect. True friends are those who never desert you when you are in need.这两句话使用了定语从句，为文章增色不少。文章最后一句Whenever we have problems, we never hesitate to offer support to each other.使用了时间状语从句。除此之外，文章还使用了并列句，宾语从句等。这些都使文章更具吸引力。

考点：考查提纲类作文