题目内容
19.如图是学校英语网站的新增部分栏目,网站负责人Mr.Black就此向同学们征询意见.假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示用英语给Mr.Black写E-mail主要内容包括:
1.最喜欢的栏目及理由;
2.你建议增加的栏目及理由.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
参考词汇:栏目-column.
Dear Mr.Black,
I am glad that there will be some new columns in our English website.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇为图画类写作.题目要求写出你最喜欢的英语网站的新增栏目,以及建议增加的栏目.图片上的栏目有,今日世界,旅行观光,名人故事,运动健康.考生可以选择自己最有话可写的方面入手,保证内容的丰富性.本篇文章需要分两段,一段写最喜欢的栏目及理由、还有一段写自己的意见或建议.还需要选择恰当的连接词,使文章更连贯.
重要短语:
have higher expectation to、turn deaf ear to、the latest science and technology、would appreciate it if等等,使得文章语言更加连贯,意思更明确.此外,文章还运用了多种句式和结构,比如
高分句子:
1.From the new column Today's World we can learn what's going on around the world.本句是宾语从句,what's going on around the world作宾语.
2.I would appreciate it if there are some English-learning columns in the website.本句含有重要句型 I would appreciate it if…,如果…我将不胜感激.
解答 Dear Mr.Black,
How are you doing?
I'm glad that there will be some new columns in our English website.Of the four columns,I have higher expectation to Today's World.As you know,today's world is a changing world.We'll become outdated if we turn deaf ear to it.From the new column Today's World we can learn what's going on around the world.(高分句型)It can also enrich our knowledge of the latest science and technology.(介绍我最喜欢的栏目以及原因)
As to suggestion,I would appreciate it if there are some English-learning columns in the website.(高分句型)Most of my classmates are eager to learn English well,but short of learning chances after class.I hope our website can do something about it.(提出建议增加的栏目)
Best wishes.
Yours
Li Hua
点评 半开放性作文留给考生发挥的空间比较大.一般只提供一个话题或一个图片,要求考生合理地进行想象.考生在写作时,需要做到以下几点:第一、认真审题,把握所有信息.第二、确定体裁,把握行文格式.第三、罗列提纲,思考表达方式.第四、组织语言,展开写作. 写作时,运用熟悉的英语词汇、句型等;要尽量运用多样化的句式,注意长短句的结合、简单句和复合句的结合;要注意上下文的衔接,过渡要自然.第五、认真检查,查漏补缺.
| A. | would open | B. | opened | C. | had opened | D. | was to open |
| A. | Before | B. | Where | C. | Unless | D. | Until |