题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你叫李华。你的同学Mary因为生病没来上课,你的班主任请你写一封E-mail告诉Mary这个星期天班上要开晚会。内容要点如下:
(1) 星期天晚上要开个英语晚会。
(2) 晚饭后6:30在教室集合,晚会7:00开始。
(3) 每个同学都要表演,可以唱英文歌,朗读英文诗,讲英语故事或者跳舞等。
(4) 如果她觉得好些,希望她能来参加。
注意:1.文章必须包括所有要点。
2.词数:100左右。
3.参考词汇:诗poem 班主任headteacher
【答案】
Dear Mary
You didn’t come to school today because you were ill. We will hold an English evening party this Sunday. Our headteacher asked me to tell you about it. An English evening party will be held this Sunday evening. Every one of our class is requested to be in the classroom at 6:30 after supper. The party will begin at 7:00 P.M. Every student should perform during the evening party. You may tell English stories, sing English songs, read English poems or dance and so on. If you are feeling better ,we all hope you can come to join us. I am sure we will have a wonderful time!
【解析】
试题分析:本书面表达是一篇提纲作文。提纲作文写作的时候注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语hold an English evening party 举行英语晚会;after supper 晚饭之后;tell English stories,讲英文故事;and so on等等;have a wonderful time玩的开心;Every one of our class is requested to be in the classroom at 6:30 after supper.这句中的谓语动词是is requested to be,是被动语态。文中还运用到If you are feeling better ,即:if引导的条件状语从句。另外,文章变换主语,没有都使用人称代词开头,这一点也很好。