Question

假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社编辑写一封信，表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法。

内容主要包括：

优点：1. 话题广泛；

                    2. 图片丰富；

                    3. 有助于提高学习兴趣。

建议：适当降低词汇难度。

注意：1. 词数100 左右；

      2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

      3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Editor,

    As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.______________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

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                                                                  Best regards,

                                                                  Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject.

However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, I’d like to suggest changing them into easier ones.

                                                              Best regards,

                                                               Li Hua

【解析】本题是考生比较熟悉的体裁的一种：书信。同时也是一种半开放性作文，对考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生仔细梳理要点，认真谋篇布局，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇，和合适的连接词如what’s more,however,therefore等。同时可以穿插使用一些高级的句型，如强调句，状语从句等，可以让文章更上一个档次。