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17．假如你叫李华，今年18岁，是光明中学的一名高二学生．你所在的城市明年要举办国际旅游节，现向全市招募志愿者，请你根据以下要点向组委会写一封申请信，应征旅游节志愿者的工作．
1．你的个人信息；
2．你的兴趣爱好与特长等；
3．你的相关经历或经验；
4．你的承诺．
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．信的开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Committee，
    Thank you for taking your time to read my letter．I really hope to be a volunteer for the International Tourism Festival in our city．
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________       Yours，
                                                               Lihua．

分析 半开放性作文为本题主要考查点．周琦所在的城市明年要举办国际旅游节，现向全市招募志愿者，本文要求以周琦的身份写信给主委会，应征旅游节志愿者．所以本文使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态．考生可以根据自己的实际情况组织全文要点．文章要点如下：1．个人信息：姓名：周琦；年龄：18岁；职业：光明中学高二学生；2．兴趣爱好和特长：喜欢旅游参观名胜古迹，了解城市的历史，能够成为文化使者．擅长英语，还获得过口语大赛一等奖；3．经历和经验：参加过2010年广州亚运会，做过体育馆志愿者．4．个人承诺：如果被接纳，会努力为这个城市工作，让外国游客宾至如归．建议文章分成两部分，第一部分叙述要点1、2、3；第二段介绍要点4．最后再适当添加的书信串联词让文章更流畅．
亮点部分   这篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，包含了所有的要点，没有任何遗漏．另外范文中使用了较多的高级词汇，如have a good knowledge of掌握…、place of interest名胜古迹、be familiar with熟悉…；同时文章中的串联词使用的也很到位，如what's more，above all；文章中最后还使用了分词做状语的用法，如I'll be surely devoted to the job，making the foreigners more familiar with our city．这些技巧的运用让文章显得很有层次性．

解答 Dear Committee，
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter．I really hope to be a volunteer for the International Tourism Festival in our city．
I am Zhou Qi，an outgoing boy of 18 years old in Senior 2 of Guangming Middle School．I'm interested in travelling and have visited many places of interest．I have a good knowledge of our city's history，so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier of our splendid culture．（高分句型）What's more，English is my favourite and best subject．（高分句型）Last year I won the first prize in the oral English contest for high school students in our city．I think it easy for me to communicate well with the foreigners．Above all，I have experienced the 2010 Guangzhou Asian Games and I have been a successful stadium volunteer．（高分句型）
I'll be too glad to work for our city if I am given the opportunity．I'll be surely devoted to the job，making the foreigners more familiar with our city．（高分句型）
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Zhou

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感．（1）认真审题，确定体裁． （2）构思要点．根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架．（3）选词造句，避难选易．（4）认真检查，避免错误．仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致．

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