题目内容
8.最近在你们班上的一次英语 Talking Show 上,大家谈到了喂养宠物的事,同学们对于喂养宠物持不同意见.请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍他们对喂养宠物的不同观点,并表达你的看法.赞成的理由:1.表现了人与自然的和谐相处.2.可以消除一些人的孤独感.3.可以培养人的性情.
反对的理由:1.浪费时间和精力,影响正常生活.2.影响环境卫生.3.有可能伤人.
你的看法:┅┅
注意:1.文章必须包括以上的全部要点.
2.词数100左右;开头已给出,不记入总词数.
We have had a heated discussion about keeping pets on our English Talking Show recently.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息最近在你们班上的一次英语 Talking Show 上,大家谈到了喂养宠物的事,同学们对于喂养宠物持不同意见.请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍他们对喂养宠物的不同观点,并表达你的看法,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:分别从不同观点和理由两个方面来讨论该话题 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:are in favour of 支持;are against反对;in harmony with和谐相处;thus因此;However然而;a waste of 浪费…Besides另外;More importantly更重要的是; Personally就个人而言;
The supporters think keeping pets shows that they can live in harmony with nature,in which people can develop their inner minds.(高分句型一)
For old people,keeping pets can bring them joy,thus driving away their loneness when their family are not beside them.(高分句型二)
But pets must be kept on condition that they don't cause trouble to others.(高分句型三)
解答 We have had a heated discussion about keeping pets on our English Talking Show recently.Some are in favour of keeping pets,while others are against it.
The supporters think keeping pets shows that they can live in harmony with nature,in which people can develop their inner minds.(高分句型一)For old people,keeping pets can bring them joy,thus driving away their loneness when their family are not beside them.(高分句型二)
However,those who are against it argue that it is a waste of time,money and energy.Besides,pets often make our living environment dirty and smelly.More importantly,pets may sometimes attack people.
Personally,I think it's one's freedom to decide whether to keep pets or not.But pets must be kept on condition that they don't cause trouble to others.(高分句型三)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.