题目内容
3.现在很多学生因为种种原因很少参加体育锻炼,请你以"Middle school students should take an active part in Physical Exercise"为题目写一篇短文.写作内容需包括以下要点:
1.学生们不参加体育活动的原因(如没时间,不喜欢,认为没必要,怕受伤等)
2.进行体育活动的好处(如强身健体,减压,加强团队合作,建立友谊等)
3.倡导同学们积极参与体育锻炼.
注意:1.100词左右. 2.可以增加细节,适当发挥,以使行文连贯.
分析 本文是一篇话题作文,要求根据所给题目写一篇表达自己观点的作文.注意以下几点:1.仔细阅读题目所给要求,注意题目的话题,;2.不要漏掉题目所给的内容,注意增加细节,加入自己的想法.3.运用多种句型,适当运用一些高级词汇,给文章增色.
【亮点说明】文章语气恰当,无低级错误,文笔流畅,层次分明,运用了高级句式,如 It's no doubt that when we get back to study,we can study better.还用了first、second、third给我文章分层,很有结构性.
解答 Middle School Students Should Take an Active Part in Physical Exercise
Nowadays,most students don't do sports for all kinds of reasons.They think that it is a waste of time and they may get injured in the process.
In my opinion,it is very necessary for us to take part in sports activities.(高分句型一)First,by doing some sports,like playing football,pingpong and so on,we can relax ourselves from concentrating a long time on class.There is no doubt that when we get back to study,we can study better.(高分句型二)Second,doing sports is good for our health,so we will be unlikely to fall ill.Third,doing sports can help us form a new hobby,like swimming,hiking and so on.In this way,our life will be more colorful.
All in all,we can benefit a lot from doing exercises.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.