Question

We all know that "Chances favor the prepared mind"． Only if you are well prepared, will you be able to seize them.

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2．除诗歌外，文体不限。

3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学习名称。

4．词数不少于120词。

Answer 1

There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life．However, many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared．I didn’t realize it until I went to high school.

Soon after I became a senior one student, a singing competition was to be held in school．I love singing but I was very shy then and had never sung at the top of my voice in public．I could only sing to myself most of the time．Somehow, I wanted to have a try．When I talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice and told me as long as I got well prepared, I would make it．With their encouragement, I became confident and practiced hard after class．Sometimes, I would turn to my music teacher for help．When I felt I was ready, the day came．Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions．It turned out that I won the first prize ．

This experience has taught me a precious lesson in my life．If you are not successful yet, most probably you haven’t been well prepared．Once you have, chances will surely favor you.

【解析】

试题分析：本题提示是：我们都知道“机会偏爱有准备的头脑”只有你准备好，你才能抓住机会。题目要求结合生活实例来写一篇文章，此类题目更偏向于类似记叙文写作，考生尽量写成记叙文，以减小题目难度。范文为经典的三段论式写作，第一段为总起段，第二段记叙生活经历，第三段总述全文。第一段开头There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life．使用了that领导的定语从句；第二句中many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared．首先使用了that领导的宾语从句，又使用了who领导的定语从句；第二段第一句中Soon after I became a senior one student, a singing competition was to be held in school．使用了after领导的时间状语从句；第四句When I talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice使用了when领导的时间状语从句；第二段倒数第二句Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions．使用了一个伴随状语从句；最后一段最后一句Once you have, chances will surely favor you使用了once领导的状语从句。本文短语使用也十分精彩，使用了be eager for渴望…，have a try试一试，as long as只要，turn to向…寻求帮助，turn out结果是等许多常用的短语。本文在词语上最大亮点就是副词的使用，如使用了However然而，Soon不久，Somehow不知怎么的，Sometimes有时，这些副词的使用，使得文章的句型转换更加自然，不会使文章显得过于累赘，用的恰到好处。总结：记叙文写作首先要注意文章结构，尽量使文章结构清晰，其次注意从句不要使用过于频繁，以免使文章过于累赘。

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