题目内容
假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。
1．学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2．学会做人：真诚，友善；
3．学会其他：考生自拟。
注意：1．词数120左右；
2．发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on learn in senior high school．
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Thank you!
One possible version：
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school．
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance．It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class．
In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere．
Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life．
No pains no gains, I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here．
Thank you.
【解析】
试题分析：
根据提示可知本篇作文为发言稿类型。一般在考试中发言稿类作文的开头和结尾都已给出，所以相比于书信类文章，发言稿类作文对格式没有很多要求。学生需要注意的是发言稿的主题和发言的要点。分析题干可知这篇作文的主题是“What to learn in senior high school?”，发言的要点包括“学习；做人和其他”，关于第三点的描述，鼓励学生在熟悉的基础上多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句，自由发挥。在行文结构中，第一段要对直接引出话题，开门见山地表明自己的发言主题。在全文的写作中要注意选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。如第一段It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school．一句话就概括了材料大意。之后的部分就是分条阐明自己的观点，注意逻辑性和层次感。
【亮点说明】
在这篇范文中，文章的层次感和逻辑性非常强，由Firstly, In addition和Finally很清晰地表明了文章的层次，同时也是表明观点的暗示，极大地方便了阅卷老师的阅卷过程。其次，在描述三个发言要点的过程中长短句结合，如长句It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class和o pains no gains, I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here等，短句Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently；In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others；Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. 作者选择用短句表达发言的要点，简单明了。然后适当用长句拓展补充观点。在这些长短句中，句型变化不单一，固定搭配使用灵活，如动名词作主语Developing a good habit is also of importance；强调句It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.尤其是最后一句I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here既有that引导的宾语从句，宾语从句中还体现了with的复合结构作条件状语。句式灵活多变，体现了作者深厚的文字功底。
为配合你市开展的“创建文明城市”活动，用英语写一篇短文倡议同学们做个文明的好学生。
【写作内容】
活动目的：配合“创建文明城市”活动 活动对象：全校学生 活动内容：衣着整洁 使用礼貌用语(谢谢、请等)，不说脏话 乐于助人 注重言行，公共场所不大声说笑 与别人建立良好的关系 遵守交通规则、在公交车上主动为老人及带小孩的乘客让座 保持环境卫生 |
参考词汇：文明城市 civilized city
【写作要求】
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。