Question

假设你是李华。最近你班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：是否有必要进行太空探险。请结合下表内容，给校报用英语写一篇文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。

一些同学赞同	一些同学反对	你自己的观点
●更好地了解太空	●耗资巨大	●？
●从太空获得新资源	●宇航员的安全问题
●扩大人类的生存空间

注意：1. 字数：100字左右
2. 标题与开头已写好，不计入总词数。
提示词：宇航员：astronauts 生存空间: living space
Outer Space Exploration, YES or NO?
The other day at a class meeting we had an argument over

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Outer Space Exploration, YES or NO?

The other day at a class meeting we had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space exploration.

Some of us held it important to research outer space because, first of all, people can get a better understanding of outer space through their exploration. Second, new resources can be found there for human use. Third, this exploration can possibly bring about new living space for human life.

However, others thought very differently. They said this kind of exploration is much too costly. Besides, it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.

In my opinion, people should be pioneering(先驱的；开创的)and therefore such exploration of outer space is worth trying out.

【解析】

试题分析：

本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是是否有必要进行太空探险，题目给出了大部分要点，也要考生给出自己的观点。文章结构清晰，先是介绍赞同的观点，然后是反对的观点，最后是自己的观点，要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点，要求观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体。

【亮点说明】所给范文结构清晰，语言简洁，运用了一些好的词组和句子：get a better understanding of 更好的理解，bring about 带来，is worth trying out值得尝试。The other day at a class meeting we had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space exploration.这句话使用了宾语从句， Some of us held it important to research outer space这句话使用了it做形式宾语， it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.这句话使用了it做形式主语，还有范文还使用了first of all, Second, Third, Besides这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。

考点：考查议论文书面表达