[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Since my childhood, libraries have played a role of great important in my life. When l was a pupil,I regarded on my every trip to the school library as an adventure.I enjoyed my stay there when I could read various book l was interested in. It was for this reason why I decided to volunteer at a library. At first I had difficulty remember where each book should be shelved and I got used to doing so soon with the help of a kind librarian. Working in the library might seem bored for most people. However, it was rewarding experience for me. It has not only developed my ability to read,but also help me make a contribution to society.

【答案】important改为 importance

on 删掉

when改为 where

book改为 books

why改为that

remember 改为 remembering

and改为 but

bored改为boring

rewarding前加a

help改为 helped

【解析】

本文是记叙文，叙述了作者从童年起，图书馆就在他的生活中扮演着重要的角色，为了读到更多的书，作者在图书馆当了一名志愿者。这样做不仅培养了他的阅读能力，而且帮助他为社会做出了贡献。

第一处：考查名词。句意：从我的童年起，图书馆就在我的生活中扮演着重要的角色。of是介词，后应该用名词，important是形容词，重要的；importance名词。故答案为：important改为 importance。

第二处：考查动词短语。句意：当我还是个小学生的时候，我把每次去学校图书馆的旅行都看作是一次冒险。短语regard…as把……看作。regard后不用介词on。故答案为：on 删掉。

第三处：考查定语从句的关系词。句意：我在那里过得很愉快，在那里我可以读我感兴趣的各种书。先行词是there，后跟where引导的定语从句，where在从句中作地点状语。故答案为：when改为 where。

第四处：考查名词的复数。句意：句意：我在那里过得很愉快，在那里我可以读我感兴趣的各种书。根据various后跟名词的复数形式。故答案为：book改为 books 。

第五处：考查强调句型。句意：正是因为这个原因，我决定去图书馆做志愿者。这里是强调句型，it was+被强调部分+that+其他，判断强调句型的方法：去掉it was和that句子仍然成立，不缺成分。故答案为：why改为that。

第六处：考查动名词。句意：起初，我很难记住每本书应该放在哪里，但是我很快就习惯了在一位善良的图书管理员的帮助下这样做。短语have difficulty （in）doing sth做某事有困难。这里用动名词作介词的宾语。故答案为：remember 改为 remembering。

第七处：考查并列连词。句意：起初，我很难记住每本书应该放在哪里，但是我很快就习惯了在一位善良的图书管理员的帮助下这样做。and表示前后是并列关系，but表示前后是转折关系。这里是转折关系。故答案为：and改为 but。

第八处：考查形容词。句意：对大多数人来说，在图书馆工作似乎很无聊。这里句子的主语Working in the library是一件事。这个事情令人无聊的用boring。人感到物聊的用bored。故答案为：bored改为boring。

第九处：考查冠词。句意：然而，这对我来说是一次有价值的经历。这里experience经历，是可数名词的单数，其前用不定冠词。故答案为：rewarding前加a。

第十处：考查动词时态。句意：它不仅培养了我的阅读能力，而且帮助我为社会做出了贡献。根据前面用的是developed一般过去时，所以这里也应该用一般过去时。故答案为：help改为 helped。

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