题目内容
17.在"世界急救日"即将到达之际,你校英语报计划出版一期急救常识专刊,现面向全校学生公开征集稿件,你有意参加.请你根据下面提示内容,用英语写一篇短文,介绍在车祸现场对伤者进行急救的方法和步骤.1、首先确保现场的安全;2、询问伤者,确保其呼吸正常;3、检查伤口,如流血则应采取止血措施;4、如需急救,确保其处于康复位置.
注意:1、词数100左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3、参考词汇:康复位置recovery position.
分析 本文是一篇说明文.文章给出了写作内容和写作注意事项.给考生提供了比较明确的写作参考的依据.考生需要发挥想象、展开思维,把写作内容拓展开来.成文时要注意:1.文章主要用第一人称(we);2.时态:一般现在时;3.文章的内容要点要齐全;4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,以提高文章的档次;5.注意使用一些连接词,使得文章表达自然、流畅.6.注意 文章的字数要够,100个单词左右.
文章使用的高级的句型.1.宾语从句:we should first make sure that the accident scene is safe;We should ask the injured person if he or she is OK,and see if the injured person is breathing.;2.目的状语从句:so that we won't get hurt.;3.条件状语从句:If there has been a traffic accident; If he or she is bleeding;4.连词+现在分词作状语:when giving first aid.3.灵活使用短语:make sure;try to do等.
解答 If there has been a traffic accident,we should first make sure that the accident scene is safe so that we won't get hurt.(高分句型一)We should ask the injured person if he or she is OK,and see if the injured person is breathing.If not,we must try to start his or her breathing.(高分句型二)Next,we should check for cuts and wounds.If he or she is bleeding,we should try to stop the bleeding by using proper methods.Do member:when giving first aid,please place the person in a recovery position.(高分句型三)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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