题目内容
【题目】假定你是高二年级学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣,并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1.这种单车的使用方法(如:APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等);
2.这种单车的优势;
3.你对这种单车的看法。
注意:1.词数在110左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:智能手机smartphone,二维码the QR code
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【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike-mobike mentioned in your latest letter.
It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, can the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.
Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.
Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题,假定你是红星中学初三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣,并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:1. 这种单车的使用方法(如:APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等);2. 这种单车的优势;3. 你对这种单车的看法。其次要确定时态,表示客观事实,所以这篇文章要使用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构,按照题目所给内容逐条翻译即可。在写作过程中,上下文意思要连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合题目所给出的信息,不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式,词数控制在八十词以上。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.这里含有一个主语从句。Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. 这里含有一个表语从句。