题目内容
17.假设你是某校一名高三学生,被校学生会推选参加兄弟学校联合举办主题为"怎样成为一名效率高的学习者"的交流研讨会,请按要求用英语写一篇短文.内容须包括以下要点:•制定切实可行的学习日程表;
•合理分配各科学习时间,均衡发展;
•适当参加体育锻炼;
•其他.
注意:1.短文标题和开头句子已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可根据提示适当发挥;
3.词数:120左右.
参考词汇:seminar n.研讨会 agenda n.日程表 well-balanced adj均衡发展
How to Be an Efficient Learner?
Being Senior Three students,we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day.
分析 本文讨论的话题是"How to Be an Efficient Learner?"可以从时间管理,预习复习,相同学老师借力等方面着手展开叙述,提高学习的效率.要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象,进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法,增添了写作的灵活性,同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力.
亮点词汇及句式 realistic agenda现实的计划表 refresh our mind使头脑清醒 All in all总之 well-balanced 均衡发展
Firstly,we should make a realistic agenda,which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover.(高级句型)
It's also important to read extra books to ensure you feed on new ideas from time to time.(高级句型)
解答 How to be an efficient learner?
Being Senior Three students,we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day.Because of limited time,it's important to be an efficient learner.But how can we become efficient learners?
Firstly,we should make a realistic agenda,which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover.(高级句型)Secondly,divide our spare time into several parts to make sure we go through all the subjects and try to be well-balanced students.Thirdly,take regular exercise to refresh our mind and energy and ensure we are healthy enough to get round our lessons.Remember:All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.Besides,hold informal seminars to discuss with classmates about difficult problems and find best solutions.It's also important to read extra books to ensure you feed on new ideas from time to time.(高级句型)
All in all,efficiency is the key to success.
点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁.本文是议论文. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.
Danny came to my school in seventh grade.He was handsome and smart.I fell for him at once and so were many girls.That,(36)A,soon changed.
Danny had been in our school for about a week when his parents picked him up in a/an(37)
D car that made loud noise.Obviously that Danny was poor and he was no longer (38)B material.
I had a poor family too; I just (39)C it from everyone.I was so ashamed of my situation that I never had kids come over to my house.I felt like my friends would judge me if they knew the truth.It was a lot of work keeping my (40)B,but I figured it was easier than it would be to have no friends.
One day,our teacher,Mr.Sims,announced that the seventh-grade field trip would be to an amusement park.The classroom was filled with (41)C as the girls discussed what to wear and what to bring with them.I felt(42)D.But not Danny.He simply told everyone that he wouldn't be going.When asked why,Danny stood up and stated,"I can't(43)A it.My dad hurt his back and has been out of (44)B.I'm not asking my parents for money."
Sitting back in his seat,Danny held his head up (45)C,even though whispering had begun."Dan,I'm very proud of you for(46)A the situation that your parents are in.Not every student can do that."replied Mr.Sims.Glaring at us,he spoke again,only louder.
"We're going to do things differently.The trip is not until the end of the month,so we have plenty of time (47)D fund-raising.Each student will be responsible for bringing in an idea for fund-raising.Bring them in tomorrow.If a student doesn't want to(48)B,he or she will be spending the field trip day here at the school.Any questions?"
While walking home,I(49)C some boys talking with Danny.I worried that they were giving him a(50)D time,but as I got closer,I realized they were just (51)A about the best ideas for a fund-raiser.
In order to (52)D in the class,I lied and came up with excuse after excuse.But Danny made a(53)A in my life by standing up and admitting he was poor.I no longer felt I had to (54)B.And the funny thing was that my friends stuck by me when I finally let them get closer.
Danny,because of his courage and(55)C rather than his great looks,is someone I will never forget.
| 36.A.however | B.therefore | C.thus | D.so |
| 37.A.expensive | B.shining | C.sports | D.old |
| 38.A.boss | B.boyfriend | C.teacher | D.actor |
| 39.A.distinguished | B.separated | C.hid | D.heard |
| 40.A.word | B.secret | C.promise | D.diary |
| 41.A.disappointment | B.concern | C.excitement | D.pride |
| 42.A.confident | B.curious | C.surprised | D.upset |
| 43.A.afford | B.understand | C.take | D.believe |
| 44.A.debt | B.work | C.sight | D.control |
| 45.A.sadly | B.eagerly | C.proudly | D.worriedly |
| 46.A.understanding | B.improving | C.avoiding | D.creating |
| 47.A.to | B.on | C.at | D.for |
| 48.A play | B.contribute | C.escape | D.register |
| 49.A.imagined | B.suggested | C.noticed | D.left |
| 50.A.meaningful | B.free | C.good | D.hard |
| 51.A.debating | B.complaining | C.learning | D.writing |
| 52.A.check | B.live | C.stay | D.fit |
| 53.A.difference | B.sense | C.challenge | D.fortune |
| 54.A.hesitate | B.lie | C.win | D.suffer |
| 55.A.intelligence | B.silence | C.honesty | D.kindness. |