Question

16．假定你是李华，最近你在当地报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告，称其有称职教练（ instructor），一周包会．你会一点游泳，但水性不太好，想在暑假参加训练．请你写一封咨询信了解相关情况，要点如下：
1．训练的具体时间和地点．
2．条件和费用．
3．其他特别注意的事项．
注意
1．词数 100 左右．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．开头语和结束语已为你写好．
Dear Sir/Madam，
I have read your advertisement in the newspaper．____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．
                          Your s sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分巨型：
1．I'm writing to inquire when and where the course will be given，and how long the training course will last each day．我写信来是想咨询这门训练课程将会在什么时间以及在什么地方举行，并且每一天将会花费多少时间．
2．Besides，would you be so kind as to tell me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary？除此之外，请问你能不能够告诉我需不需要准备一些特别的东西，或者说贵公司会提供所有必须品吗？
when and where 用于特殊疑问句中，先时间状语再接地点状语，当用于句尾时，应为方式状语-地点状语-时间状语．be done为被动语态，在文中表明该项课程是由该公司举行，而不是这门课程本事举行．
so+形容词+as to do sth"如此…以致"，以一种非常委婉的语气提出自己的问题
whether…or…"是…还是…"，表示一种选择

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
       I have read your advertisement in the newspaper．You mentioned in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week's training．
I can swim a little but I'm not very confident in the water．So I'm interested in taking part in the training course．Fortunately，the summer holiday is around the corner．（高分句型）I'm writing to inquire when and where the course will be given，and how long the training course will last each day．
I also want to know how much you will charge me for that．
（高分句型）Besides，would you be so kind as to tell me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary？
   I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 考生在写作时应注意提纲类作文，所给出的几个要点，不能漏掉任意要点，在写作中应注意时态、语态的正确使用，思路要清晰，针对每一要点，可以做出适当补充，以达到有理有据，并注意上下文的衔接．