Question

It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. No one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing one' s task. Strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own.

注意：

1. 不得照抄英语提示语。

2. 除诗歌外，文体不限。

3. 内容必须结合生活中的一个事例。

4. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

5. 词数为120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will

It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. One of the most typical examples is that in the present-day society, a growing number of people give up or fail to quit smoking just because of their poor willpower during the process. A variety of factors may account for this phenomenon as follows.

For one thing, no one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing one’s task. It is of importance for people to stick to their original aim. A great number of smokers would stop smoking a couple of days after they have made their determination, but only a few of them may succeed in the end. For another, the people who cannot quit smoking may easily be affected by his circumstance and surroundings. In that case, people tend to fail to resist various temptations around them.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。根据提示语写文章，一定要写与提示部分相关的话题。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮点说明】It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence.这里含有一个主语从句；One of the most typical examples is that in the present-day society, a growing number of people give up or fail to quit smoking just because of their poor willpower during the process.这里含有一个表语从句。For one thing, no one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing one’s task.这里含有一个同位语从句。For another, the people who cannot quit smoking may easily be affected by his circumstance and surroundings.这里含有一个定语从句。From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future.这里含有一个同位语从句。

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