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假如你叫李华，是新华中学高三的一名学生。5月，美国一中学组织部分学生到你校交流。Peter将在你家居住15天，作为东道主，你给Peter 发一封电子邮件， 内容如下：
你的基本情况；
你的计划安排；
征求对方的意见；
注意：1）词数不少于80；
2）邮件开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总次数；
3）可适当增加细节；
Dear Peter,
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I am looking forward to getting your reply soon.
Yours,
LiHua


One possible version：
Dear Peter,
I am Lihua, studying in Senior 3 of Xinhua High School, which you will visit. I am very happy for your homestay.
I like science subjects very much, especially maths. But my spoken English is so poor that I can’t communicate with foreigners fluently. Thank God you will come to help me with this problem. By the way, NBA is my favourite, so whenever I am free, I do watch it on TV. If only I could watch a live game in the USA!
Here I’d like to make some arrangements for our stay. Besides your team’s activities, I will show you around our city., and on the weekend we will go to Confucius’ home for a visit to experience some Chinese culture.
Of course, that’s what I want to do during your stay. What’s your opinion?
I am looking forward to getting your reply soon.
Yours,
LiHua

解析试题分析：本文要求写一封电子邮件，属于应用文的写作范畴。邮件开头结尾已经给出，所以不需要注意格式要求，只需按照要求展开行文即可。本文需要包括的要点有：自己基本情况的介绍、Peter来家后的计划安排和征求Peter建议三部分内容。在写作时要注意语言的简洁明了和礼貌委婉。为了语言的通顺流畅，内容的衔接和文章结构层次的清晰需要恰当使用连接词和过渡句。此外本文可以使用一般现在时来介绍自己的情况，使用一般将来时介绍自己的计划安排等。
【亮点说明】本文要点全面，行文流畅自然。作者首先在开头对Peter的即将到来表示欢迎，然后用三个段落分别介绍三个要点，即自我介绍，计划安排和征求建议。在层次结构上比较清晰，很好地完成了写作任务。在句型结构上，作者使用了让步状语从句whenever I am free, 表语从句that’s what I want to do during your stay.定语从句which you will visit. I am very happy for your homestay.等多种复合句和固定句式If only I could watch a live game in the USA!使文章句式多样化，增添了文章的亮点。此外，作者在文中还使用了分词短语studying in Senior 3 of Xinhua High School、介词短语By the way等，这些都显示了作者的较高水平的写作能力。
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