题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,上周末正好是中国的重阳节,你帮助祖父母安排了去北京的旅行。请你根据以下四幅图,写一篇短文,叙述整个过程。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Qindao. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Qindao and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue.
After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents needed, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.
Respecting the old and cherishing the young is a traditional Chinese virtue.I am pround of what I have done for my grangparents!
【解析】
本文是看图作文,要仔细看每幅图片,将图片上的内容写全,要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文是看图写作文。共有四幅图画,文章包含了图画的所有内容,语句通顺,连贯性强,布局合理,层次分明,运用高级句子。together with连接主语,别致新颖;I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. Although引导让步状语从句;Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.现在分词作时间状语;Respecting the old and cherishing the young is a traditional Chinese virtue动名词短语作主语;I am pround of what I have done for my grangparents!介词的宾语从句用在句中。