题目内容
【题目】假设你是某高中生李华.在学习了牛津高中英语模块二第二单元 Reading An adventure in Africa 后,你班对主人公 Toby 是否有必要开展这样的冒险之旅进行了讨论。请根据下表所 提供的信息给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况,并表达你的看法。
有必要 | 1、结识不同的人.经历不同的文化 2、拓宽视野,丰富知识 3、...... | 你的观点 ......(至少 2 点) |
没必要 | 1、耗时费钱 2、干扰野生动物生活,破坏生态自然环境 3、...... |
注意:1、对所给要点逐一陈述.适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2、词数 150 左右。信的开头、结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3、作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
4.参考词汇:horizons n.视野、眼界
Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've recently had about whether it is necessary for Toby to have an adventure travelling in Africa. We do have different opinions on this matter.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've recently had about whether it is necessary for Toby to have an adventure travelling in Africa. We do have different opinions on this matter.
Some students are in favor of it. With the adventure traveling, they will have more chances to meet completely different people and experience totally different cultures. Their horizons will be broadened, and their knowledge will be enriched. Most importantly, placing themselves in situations where things don’t always go as planned, adventure makes it possible for them to learn to deal with the uncertainties and meet the challenges, thus helping build their confidence.
However, others argue that adventure is nothing but a waste of time and money. The peace of nature and the animals living in the wild will be disturbed, causing awfully much damage to the environment. Worse still, it can sometimes be dangerous, costing people their precious lives.
Personally, adventure travelling does good not only to our health but also to our mind. Only if we make sure those advantages outweigh the disadvantages can we truly benefit from it. (150 words)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文是一封书信。假设你是某高中生李华.在学习了牛津高中英语模块二第二单元 Reading An adventure in Africa 后,你班对主人公 Toby 是否有必要开展这样的冒险之旅进行了讨论。请根据下表所 提供的信息给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况,并表达你的看法。写作时首先要认真阅读前面的提示,根据所给提纲,列出要点,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文是一封书信,格式正确,要点齐全,结构紧密,文中使用高级词汇和句子。With the adventure traveling, they will have more chances to meet completely different people and experience totally different cultures.句中使用with的独立主格结构;Their horizons will be broadened, and their knowledge will be enriched.句中使用一般将来时态的被动语态;placing themselves in situations where things don’t always go as planned,句中where引导定语从句;adventure makes it possible for them to learn to deal with the uncertainties and meet the challenges, thus helping build their confidence.句中it做形式宾语,同时现在分词做结果状语;Only if we make sure those advantages outweigh the disadvantages can we truly benefit from it.部分倒转经典运用;另外,in favor of,Most importantly, However, Worse still, Personally,等的运用为文章增色添彩。