Question

假定你是李华。下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动，请根据写作要点并参考图画内容，为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。

写作要点：
1．活动的策划；    2．教室的布置；
3．活动的内容；    4．你的感想。
注意：
1．短文词数不少于100；
2．开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3．可根据情况增减细节，详略得当；
4．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
 Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers’ Day; she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.

Answer 1

Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers’ Day; she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.
As Teachers’ Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. On the afternoon of September 10，some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons, and others went to buy cakes, drinks and fruits. The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, which read “Happy Teachers’ Day!”
Entering the classroom, Ms. Li was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers’ Day!” Wang Hua, our monitor, presented her with the prepared flowers. Some of the girls sang songs for Ms. Li, and three boys showed their Gongfu talent. Before we left, we enjoyed a new English song by Ms. Li.
Ms. Li spent a wonderful time with us, but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance.

本题是一篇材料作文，也是看图作文，材料和图形比较简单，考生应不难理解写作要求和写作目的，但文章首句已经给出，要求考生续写，这增加了本题的难度和区分度。考生重点要先仔细审题，审题主要包括以下几个方面：（1）主体时态；（2）主体人称；（3）内容要点。尤其是对于内容要点的把握要准确到位。再者考生需注意尽可能使句子表达形式的多样，尽量使用一些较复杂的句式结构和较高级的词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。