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17.假设你的邻居住着一位无依无靠的老人,你打算为他做一些力所能及的事.请以此为内容写一篇短文.词数不少于80 词.
提示词语:wash the clothes,clean the windows,sweep the floor,read the newspapers,play chess,write letters,go shopping.

分析 本文属于开放性的作文,考生在写作时,可以通过具体的事例来介绍如何帮助老人.如果是打算时态可以用选用一般将来时.
(高分句型一)I am going to do something for him when I am free.
在表达自己打算时使用了be going to do…;以及when引导时间状语从句;
(高分句型二) I will wash clothes,clean the window and sweep the floor.I will also read the newspapers and write letters for him.
句子里连续使用了几个will+动词原形的表达法,列举了一些打算要做的事情;

解答 My neighbor is an old man.He lives alone.(高分句型一) I am going to do something for him when I am free.(高分句型二) I will wash clothes,clean the window and sweep the floor.I will also read the newspapers and write letters for him.Sometimes I can play chess with him.After supper,we will have a walk outside.On Sundays,we may go shopping together.I am glad I can help him.I hope he'11 be happy every day.

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.

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