Question

15．目前，教育部提出要把足球纳入学校体育课程教学体系，作为体育课必修内容．某英语报以Popularization of Campus Football为题，向中学生征文．请你根据以下内容要求用英语写一篇短文应征．内容包括：
1．足球进校园的意义；
2．学校存在的问题（如场地，设施，师资等）；
3．你的看法．
注意：
1．根据提示内容可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
3．词数120左右．
4．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名．
5．参考词汇：设施facility  校园campus  普及popularize
Popularization of Campus Football
China's Ministry of Education has promoted popularization of campus football in the country's schools．        ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Secondly，it will enable teenagers to lay a solid foundation of football at an early age，which makes it possible for the national team to select excellent football players in the future．
高分句型二：
As far as I am concerned，in order to popularize campus football and realize China's football dream，I strongly advocate that we should make joint efforts to contribute to the youth football progress and that local governments at various levels should take effective measures to support the youth football development．
句型一 which makes it possible for the national team to select excellent football players in the future．该句是一个由which引导的费限制性定语从句，which在从句中充当主语，替代前面出现的整个主句
句型二 I strongly advocate that we should make joint efforts to contribute to..该句中包含一个由that引导的宾语从句，that在从句中不作句子成分
此外，还有以下短语和高级词汇：as far as sb be concerned  在某人看来  take measures to do sth 采取措施作某事

解答 Popularization of Campus Football
China's Ministry of Education has promoted popularization of campus football in the country's schools． It is of great significance to popularize campus football．Firstly，football training in schools will help teenagers to build up their bodies．Secondly，it will enable teenagers to lay a solid foundation of football at an early age，which makes it possible for the national team to select excellent football players in the future．（重要意义）（高分句型一）
However，ahead of us lie some difficulties．At present，the majority of the schools in our country have no football facilities，like standard football fields．Also，qualified coaches are in great need．
As far as I am concerned，in order to popularize campus football and realize China's football dream，I strongly advocate that we should make joint efforts to contribute to the youth football progress and that local governments at various levels should take effective measures to support the youth football development．（个人意见发表）（高分句型二）

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