题目内容
7.假设你是李华,你所在的学校正在举行"校园最美教师"的评选,请以"A good teacher"为题,写一篇演讲稿,参加你校以此为题的英语演讲比赛,介绍你所喜欢的英语教师王老师.内容要点如下:
1.年龄:30岁;
2.外观:戴着眼镜…
3.品质:关爱学生,热爱事业,责任心强…
要求:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Hello,everyone.It is a great pleasure for me to be here today.I think my English teacher Mr Wang,who is 30 years old and wears thick glasses,is the most beautiful teacher in our school.He loves us very much and treats us as his own children.Mr Wang is a teacher easy to get along with.Patient and responsible,he is always ready to help those who are poor in English and encourages them to catch up with others.He loves English and really enjoys teaching.Learning English may be boring but Mr Wang has a special way to make his classes lively and full of humor.We make great progress with the help of him.So you see this is my dearest teacher Mr Wang.We all love him very much.
That's all.Thank you for your attention.
分析 这是一篇以"A good teacher"为题的演讲稿.根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态.内容包括:一说明老师的年龄外观以及主题;二介绍老师的品质以及学生对他的爱戴.
高分句型:
1.I think my English teacher Mr Wang,who is 30 years old and wears thick glasses,is the most beautiful teacher in our school.句子里who引导非限制性定语从句 is 30 years old and wears thick glasses,代指先行词Mr Wang.
我认为我的英语老师,年约三十,戴着厚厚眼睛的王老师,是我们学校最漂亮的老师.
2.Patient and responsible,he is always ready to help those who are poor in English and encourages them to catch up with others.句子里Patient and responsible是形容词做状语,表示"耐心又负责";who引导定语从句 are poor in English,代指先行词 those; catch up with others表示"跟上".
他耐心又负责,他乐于帮助那些英语不好的学生,鼓励他们跟上其他人.
解答 Hello,everyone.It is a great pleasure for me to be here today.I think my English teacher Mr Wang,who is 30 years old and wears thick glasses,is the most beautiful teacher in our school.【高分句型一】(说明老师的年龄外观以及主题)He loves us very much and treats us as his own children.Mr Wang is a teacher easy to get along with.Patient and responsible,he is always ready to help those who are poor in English and encourages them to catch up with others.【高分句型二】He loves English and really enjoys teaching.Learning English may be boring but Mr Wang has a special way to make his classes lively and full of humor.We make great progress with the help of him.So you see this is my dearest teacher Mr Wang.We all love him very much.(介绍老师品质以及学生对他的爱戴)
That's all.Thank you for your attention.
点评 考查提纲类作文.
审查书面表达题干中隐含的读者对象和撰写人,即搞清楚此篇文章是"由谁写给谁"的.写稿人是谁一般都已明确指出,给出形式假设环境中的"某人",如"假设你是李华",写作时即用第一人称"我",即李华.而读者对象有时没有明示,要考生自己去进行判断.
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