题目内容
【题目】写作
假如你叫李华,你和父母在英国旅游期间于1月28日至30日入住Forest Hotel酒店,但对其提供的服务不满意,请发电子邮件给酒店的管理者进行投诉,要求其道歉并改进服务质量。1. 搬运工送到房间的皮箱破损;2. 卫生间漏水;3. 楼下酒吧有噪音,并持续到很晚,影响休息。
注意:1. 文章必须包括所有要点。可适当增加细节,以使文章连贯。
2. 词数100,文章开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数
3. 参考词汇:搬运工porter n; 皮箱suitcase n; 漏水leak vi.
Dear Manager,
My name is Li Hua. I stayed at your hotel__________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Manager,
My name is Li Hua. I stayed at your hotel, Forest Hotel, during my visit to the UK from Jan 28 to 30 with my parents. However, the service in your hotel left much to be desired. I’m writing this email to express my opinion.
First, we found our suitcases broken after they were carried to our room by one of your porters. Second, water was leaking out of the toilet in the bathroom. Third, the noise from the bar downstairs went on so late into the night each night that we couldn’t get good rest.
For the above reasons, I have to say that the service in your hotel is of poor quality. Therefore, I would like to receive a written apology from you. Meanwhile, I hope you can improve your service in the future so that none of the above happens again.
Yours sincerely,
LI HUA
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于提纲类短文,要求以李华的身份发邮件给Forest Hotel酒店投诉。要点如下:1. 你和父母在英国旅游期间于1月28日至30日入住Forest Hotel酒店,但对其提供的服务不满意。2. 搬运工送到房间的皮箱破损;3. 卫生间漏水;4. 楼下酒吧有噪音,并持续到很晚,影响休息。5. 要求其道歉并改进服务质量。首先考生要明确这是一封邮件,所以要注意格式及信件的过渡语。其次要注意使用一般过去时,因为主要叙述的是过去发生的事情。