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根据以下提示,以Travel为题写一篇100字左右的短文。
1.当工作累了时,你可以旅游,领略大自然的美丽,呼吸新鲜空气,还可以交友。
2. 有时旅游也会有烦恼,天气多变,有时可能被雨淋。
3.旅游时应准备充分,了解天气情况,有个旅伴可以互相照应,避免出事。
              Travel
Travel is a very good activity. When you’re fed up with your work or study, and when you’re free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature. You can breathe fresh air and make some friends.
But sometimes, it is not a good thing. The weather often changes. You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold while traveling.
Therefore, you should prepare yourself carefully before the trip. You’d better find a companion so that you can help each other and may avoid accidents during the travel.

试题分析:考查了提纲类短文写作,本文是关于旅游的话题,考生只要求翻译要点即可,难点在于选择合适的词汇来表达所需要的词义,要选择一些高级的词汇如be fed up with厌倦…;因为要点给了出来,对考生的谋篇布局能力要求不高,只需要用合适的连接词连接全文,也要使用多样化的句型让文章有变化。
点评:提纲类作文的难点在于要点的表达要准确到位,不能有遗漏。因为本文对考生的谋篇布局的要求不高,所以在写作的时候要合理运用连接词和高级句型。如果可能可以运用谚语让文章更有深度和层次。
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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a common place in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.
Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don’t have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.
However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can’t see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.
1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2. 然后以约120个词以”网上购物”为主题发表看法,并包括以下要点:
(1) 你认为网上购物的最大优点是什么;
(2) 描述你或你的朋友或同学网上购物的体验;
(3) 你对网上购物有什么建议.
1. 可以使用事例或其他论述方法支持你的观点, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不能直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 标题自拟.

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