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14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Three years ago I fail an important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school．Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom，I found the teachers patiently．Besides，I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class．I decided make the best of it．I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmate．Whenever I had difficulties，you were always available．Soon I became one of the most best students in my class．
My experience tells me that it's not what you are given and how you make use of it which determines who you are．

分析 本文讲述的是作者在中考失利以后，在普通高中老师和同学的帮助下，成为班里最好的学生之一的故事．
在进入普通高中以后，我努力学习与老师和同学们好好相处，无论我什么时候遇到困难，他们会一起在那，很快，我成为班里最好的学生之一．我的经验是，不是你如何付出的而是你是如何利用决定你现在的位置．

解答 Three years ago I fail an important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school．Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom，I found the teachers patiently．Besides，I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class．I decided∧make the best of it．I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmate．Whenever I had difficulties，you were always available．Soon I became one of the most best students in my class．
My experience tells me that it's not what you are given and how you make use of it which determines who you are．
解析：
1．fail-failed．   考查动词的时态．根据时间状语Three years ago可知用一般过去时；
2．a-an．    考查冠词．ordinary的首字母发音是元音，故用不定冠词an
3．disappointing-disappointed．   考查固定用法．-ing修饰修饰物，-ed修饰人，本句修饰主语 I，所以Disappointing改为Disappointed
4．patiently-patient． 考查形容词．用形容词patient修饰宾语the teachers，做作宾补．
5．make 前加to．    考查固定句型．decide to do sth是固定句型，意思是决定做某事
6．classmate-classmates． 考查名词的复数．句意是"我努力学习与老师和同学们好好相处"，所以用名词复数classmates．
7．you-they．   考查代词．句意是"无论我什么时候遇到困难，他们会一起在那"，所以用they代指my teachers and classmates．
8．去掉most．  考查形容词最高级．句意是"很快，我成为班里最好的学生之一"．most是用来构成最高级不能用来修饰比较级．
9．and-but．   考查连词．固定短语Not …．but…不是…而是…
10．which-that．   考查强调句． 句意是"我的经验是，不是你如何付出的而是你是如何利用决定你现在的位置"．所以用that和 it's构成强调句式，强调主语 what you are given and how you make use of it．

点评 考查短文改错．
动词是短文改错题里的重要考点，主要考查谓语动词的时态和语态；非谓语动词做主语，宾语，定语，状语，表语以及宾补，例如本题的1和5题．平时应该注意总结此类题．

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