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现今孩子迷恋电脑、网络的现象越来越严重,有的孩子甚至足不出户,如何教育引导孩子,成为人们的热点话题。请阅读下面的漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。

内容要求:
1.描述漫画内容;
2.分析漫画所揭示的问题;
3.提出你的看法。
注意:
1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;
3.词数120左右;
4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
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One possible version:
This picture presents to us a scene in which a family of three are walking on a country road. The father is holding a long pole with a computer tied to the end. The son is chasing the computer happily.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that some children are so addicted to the Internet that they tend to lock themselves indoors on weekends, playing computer games or surfing the Internet. Consequently, they are becoming more and more reluctant to communicate with their peers.
Personally, the more time children spend on computers, the more physical and mental problems they well suffer from. To rid children of their addiction to the Internet, parents should not only guide them in a proper way but also spare more time to stay with them, such as going out and visiting relatives. Only in this way can they resist the temptation of the Internet and lead a normal life.

解析根据提示可知这是画图式作文。图画式作文有个典型“三段式”写法。即在第一段描写图画,第二段结合现实生活分析图画的含义,第三段表达个人观点,进行个人总结。因为高考阅卷时间紧张,阅卷老师往往在极短的时间就浏览完文章,所以大家如果能够保证范文章结构衔接紧凑,紧扣题目要求,层次分明的话,往往也不难拿高分。在文章的第一段,作者简单直接用一个限制性定语从句描述图画This picture presents to us a scene,简洁自然。第二段由一个长句和一个短句组成,第一句是根据图画的内容然后描述实际生活现象It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that some children are so addicted to the Internet that they tend to lock themselves indoors on weekends,其中的同位语从句用的恰到好处。最后一段以Personally开始,一个单词就告诉阅卷老师作者的写作意图是归纳总结。这一点也是值得学习的。
【亮点说明】
这篇范文是典型的三段式作文。其结构紧凑,层次分明,文章的段首句都是主题句,然后用几句话分层次展开,简单分析,最后一段按照出题者的要求表明了自己对图画所展示的问题的看法。
这样的文章在高考中是有很大的优势的。老师阅卷是往往没有时间细看每一句,几秒钟就扫视完全篇,在这种情况下,文章的段首句就成了重中之重。范文的段首句This picture presents to us a scene in which a family of three are walking on a country road. 和It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that some children are so addicted to the Internet that they tend to lock themselves indoors on weekends, playing computer games or surfing the Internet. 以及最后一段Personally, the more time children spend on computers, the more physical and mental problems they well suffer from.再加上文章中一些高级词汇如Consequently,reluctant,peers,resist等等,和一些短句如be addicted to, rid of, suffer from, visiting relatives等给文章在细节上添分。

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Dear Li Hua,
I feel very happy to read your e-mail and I really appreciate your English. Congratulations to you. Your English has really improved a lot.
Oh, I have some good news to tell you. I’ve got a good chance to practice my Chinese as an exchange student to China. So, here I’d like to ask you for help—which school is the best one for me to attend in China. Tell me, and then I can tell my school to make contact with it.
Looking forward to your early reply and hope to meet you in China soon.
Yours friendly,
Mary
假设你是李华,请你根据下列要点,用英文给玛丽回一封电子邮件,建议她来你所在的学校。理由是:
你校每年都接纳交换生;
学校条件好,各种设施好, 有图书馆,电子阅览室……;
课外活动丰富多彩;
你校学生英语水平好,易于交流;
特别是老师好,教法生动有趣。
注意:可根据要求加以必要发挥,但不要逐字翻译;词数为120左右;开头已写好(不计入词数),但不得抄入答题卡。
参考词汇:设施:facility 电子阅览室: electro-reading-room
Hi Mary,
Nice to read your e-mail today. It’s very kind of you to give me encouragement. I owe a lot to you for your help.
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随着网络的日益普及,当前有人选择网络阅读,有人则喜欢传统阅读。传统的阅读方式似乎正在被网络阅读方式取代。假如你是某中学的李华,请你以 “Traditional Reading or Online Reading?”为题按照下列表格提供的信息写一篇英语短文,并发表自己的看法。
注意:1. 短文词数不少于100;            2. 开头部分已写好,不计入总词数;
3. 内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;  4. 短文须写在答题卷的指定区域;
5. 书写须清晰、工整。              6. 短文中不能体现本人真实信息。
Traditional Reading or Online Reading?
With the popularity of the Internet, there seems to be a trend that the traditional reading is being replaced by online reading among people, especially among students.
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                 

下图表为近几年中美两国电子商务发展比较及其将来几年的发展趋势。请根据图表信息,以 “E-commerce, an ever-increasing trend in China”为题,为某英语报写一篇稿子,内容须包括:
1、图表主要信息(用30个左右英语单词描述);
2、中国电子商务增长的原因(经济稳步增长,人民收入提高,人口大于美国,网上购物方便);
3、你的观点(可从保护和规范电子商务市场谈起)。
注意:
1、词数150左右,开头已经给出,但不计入词数;
2、作文中不得提及你所在的学校及本人姓名。
3、参考词汇:cybercrime网络犯罪;phishing网络钓鱼

E-Commerce Sales and Growth 2008-2016
(China vs US)

E-commerce, an ever-increasing trend in China
    The chart shows China’s e-commerce sales started with only 20 billion USD in 2008, and
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孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题,现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。
内容要求:
1.描述漫画内容;
2.分析漫画所揭示的问题;
3.提出你的看法。

注意:
1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;
3.词数120-150左右;
4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇:红地毯red carpet     铺路pave the way 
From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                
                                                                                

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