Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Li Hua and Wang Hai are students of Senior Three. They all work hard but have different learning methods. Li Hua listens to her teachers attentive and tries to catch everything the teachers say. She spends more time doing her homework. It is certain what she can go to bed earlier and always keeps energetic in the day.

However, Wang Hai had a different way of learning. He likes to stay up late at the night, so he often feels sleepy in class. Thus, he misses lots of key point and it usually spends him more time to finish his homework, that makes it difficult for him to concentrate what he is doing. I prefer Li Hua's learning method.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】all →both

【2】attentive →attentively

【3】more →less

【4】what →that

【5】had →has

【6】去掉night前面的the

【7】point →points

【8】spends →takes

【9】that →which

【10】concentrate后面加on

【解析】

试题分析：文章讲述了李华和王海不同的学习方法和不同的结果，给我们的学习提供借鉴。

【1】all →both.考查代词。all表示三者或以上都，both表示两者都，主语是Li Hua and Wang Hai是两个人，故all →both.

【2】attentive →attentively. 考查副词。此处修饰动词listens to用副词，指“专心听”，故attentive →attentively.

【3】more →less.考查形容词比较级。句意：李华上课注意听讲尽力抓住每个重点，她每天花较少的时间做作业。此处是和王海进行比较，故more →less.

【4】what →that.考查主语从句。句中It是形式主语，从句she can go to bed earlier and always keeps energetic in the day.是真正主语，陈述句做主语用that引导。故what →that.

【5】had →has.考查时态。全文是讲两个人的表现，用的是一般现在时，故had →has.

【6】去掉night前面的the.考查固定短语。at night“在晚上”，是固定短语，故去掉night前面的the.

【7】point →points.考查名词。此处由lots of修饰point是可数名词，要用复数形式，故point →points.

【8】spends →takes.考查动词。表示“花费某人多长时间做某事”可以用sb. spend time to do sth.或It takes∕ took sb. time to do sth. 此处主语是it要用后者，故spends →takes.

【9】that →which.考查定语从句。此处是非限制性定语从句，有逗号和后面分开，用which引导指代前面整个句子。故that →which.

【10】concentrate后面加on.考查固定短语。concentrate on是固定短语，译为“集中精力于，全神贯注于”，故concentrate后面加on.