Question

春节刚过，关于压岁钱众说纷纭，褒贬不一。对此，网上做了一项调查。
82%的网友认为，压岁钱是春节重要的传统习俗之一，代表着长辈对晚辈的美好祝愿，也是孩子们过年的盼望。
18%的参与者认为这几年越给越多的压岁钱已成为负担，而且还成了某些人公然行贿的幌子，对构建和谐健康的社会不利。
请你写一篇调查报告，阐述以上观点并说出自己的看法。开头已给出。
字数100左右，可适当扩展。
提示词：行贿 bribe
Lucky money, good or bad
After the Spring Festival, there arise some hot topics, and lucky money is included as well.

Answer 1

After the Spring Festival, there arise some hot topics, and lucky money is included as well. To collect opinions from the public, an online survey has been made.
82% of the participants regard lucky money as one of the most important traditional customs, representing good wishes from the elderly to the new generation. Besides, lucky money is the most attractive part for children, which forms the good memory of our childhood.    
The rest, however, think badly of it. For one thing, the amount is growing bigger and bigger, making it a heavy load. For another, it has been a good excuse to bribe people in power, which is bad for building a healthy and harmonious society.
Personally speaking, lucky money is nothing wrong. Only when we know its true meaning can we send our hearty wishes to the young.

试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是对春节压岁钱的不同观点，题目给出了大部分要点，也要考生给出自己的观点。文章结构清晰，先是一些同学反对的观点，然后是赞同的观点，最后是自己的观点，要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点，要求观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体。
【亮点说明】文章结构清晰，观点明确，有不少好句子和短语：regard… as“认为…是”， think badly of “对…评价不高”，Personally speaking“就个人而言”, lucky money is the most attractive part for children, which forms the good memory of our childhood. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句， the amount is growing bigger and bigger, making it a heavy load. 这句话用了现在分词做结果状语，it has been a good excuse to bribe people in power, which is bad for building a healthy and harmonious society.这句话用it做形式主语和非限制性定语从句， Only when we know its true meaning can we send our hearty wishes to the young.这句话用了倒装句。还有这篇文章还使用了：Besides, For one thing, For another,这样的关联词，使文章更加连贯。