Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序给学校英文报投稿，记述你所居住的小区在你的建议下建立爱心驿站的过程。

注意：1. 词数不少于60;

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词： 物业 the management department

Last week, a rest station was set up at my suggestion in our community. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Last week, a rest station was set up at my suggestion in our community.

One day on my way home, I noticed several deliverymen crowding at the entrance to our community. At the sight of the workers who were sweating over the work, I suddenly came up with an idea. I decided to do something for them. I went to the management department of our community and suggested setting up a rest station for those deliverymen. The manager listened carefully and thought highly of my suggestion.

The next day, a poster was put up on the bulletin board in our community to call on people to donate. Many neighbors expressed their support and contributed some money. Some food and snacks were prepared soon.

On Friday afternoon, I returned home after school as usual. To my delight, a rest station had been set up. Several deliverymen and one cleaner were having a rest at the station. Some were drinking water, while others were having fruits. Seeing the bright smiles on their faces, I felt a sense of achievement. What a meaningful experience! A small act of kindness can make a big difference.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于图画作文。记述你所居住的小区在你的建议下建立爱心驿站的过程。

第一步：审题

体裁：记叙文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时。

结构：总分法。

要求：

1.记述你帮忙建立爱心驿站的过程。

2.词数不少于60。

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

came up with; set up; think highly of; contribute; a sense of achievement

第三步：连词成句

1. At the sight of the workers who were sweating over the work, I suddenly came up with an idea.

2. I went to the management department of our community and suggested setting up a rest station for those deliverymen.

3. The manager listened carefully and thought highly of my suggestion.

4. Many neighbors expressed their support and contributed some money.

5. Seeing the bright smiles on their faces, I felt a sense of achievement.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1. 表示文章结构顺序：活动的原因；活动的内容；活动的意义

2. 表示并列补充关系：while; after; and; suddenly

第五步：润色修改