Question

假定你是李华,自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,请他代卖,要点包括:
1.外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)    2.象征意义     3.价格
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? 
                                                                                                                                                               
                                                                                                                                                               
                                                                                                                                                   
             
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red still threads, cloths and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!
Li Hua

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是对学生日常生活中存在的浪费现象，所以要用一般现在时。要求让你给校长写信，因此本文必须用第一人称。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子、句型为文章增色不少，比如I wonder if…, in the shape of, stand for, 还运用了宾语从句，if引导的条件状语从句，并注意了句子的衔接如： also，either…or….等等。