Question

随着年龄的增长，我们总想挣脱父母的怀抱，渐渐和父母产生分歧。假设你是李华，某中学英语杂志社正在开展题为 “How to get along well with your parents” 的征文活动。请你根据以下要点写一篇征文稿。
1. 事前要跟父母沟通，征求他们的建议；
2. 跟父母意见不一致时要保持冷静；
3. 多花时间跟父母在一起，跟他们一块郊游等。
注意：1. 词数：120左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Answer 1

As you are growing, you may want to be free from your parents and feel ready to make your own decisions. However, your parents will disagree with you. Your relationship with your parents may be in trouble right now. Here are some tips for you to avoid quarrels with your parents.
Discuss the rules ahead of time and not at the last minute. This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no to before you make plans.
Try to remain calm when your parents say no to something. You’d better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them.
Spend time with your family. Communicate with each other at home. Suggest activities that your whole family will enjoy together such as going for a hike, a bike ride, or going to the beach.

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，该书面表达题要求考生就“如何处理好与父母之间的关系”提出建议。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外，还要阐述自己的观点，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，答题时要注意：使用一般现在时；以祈使句为主；不要遗漏要点。注意文章的连贯性和整体性。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。
【亮点说明】范文用了一些词组：如in trouble ahead of time free from your parents, feel ready to, say yes or no to, listen to what they have to say, 等等。句型上也是多变： As you are growing, you may want to be free from your parents and feel ready to make your own decisions. 这句话用了状语从句， This way you will be able to tell what they will say yes or no to before you make plans. 和You’d better listen to what they have to say instead of quarreling with them. 这两句话用了宾语从句，如果文章最后加上下面的句子，则可与首段呼应，显得整体性更好：Follow these tips, and you will enjoy a good relationship with your parents.
考点：考查提纲类书面表达