Question

一家知名外资企业准备与当地政府合作修建一所国际学校为了、建办﹑好学校，该企业总裁Mr. White广泛征求学生意见，并公开了他的邮地址。请你以周杉的名义给他写一封E-mail，谈谈你的建议及理由。
内容要点：
1．学习环境 （如：教室，操场……）
2. 特色课程（如：网球，钢琴……）
3. ……
要求：
1. 词数100左右
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校的名称。
Dear Mr. White,
I am glad to hear you will build an international school, and I’d like to give you some advice. ___________________________________________________________________________________________
                                                                                            
    
I hope I can enter the school. 
Sincerely yours,
Zhou Shan

Answer 1

Dear Mr. White,
I am glad to hear you will build an international school, and I’d like to give you some advice. I think the new school should be nice and pleasant. Students need bright classrooms to study in, modern libraries to broaden their horizons, large playgrounds to play different kinds of sports on. The school may provide students with some special courses, such as art, tennis or piano lessons. These courses can make students relaxed and encourage them to develop freely. It would be better for students to have some chances to practice in your company so that they can get some useful experience.
I hope I can enter the school. 
Sincerely yours,
Zhou Shan

解析试题分析：考察半开放性作文。本文的话题是建设国际学校的具体理由，所给的中文提示教少，给考生发挥的余地教大。本文要注意书信的格式，同时要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】本文中有一些高级的词汇，如provide sb with sth提供某人某物。Broaden one’s horizons开阔眼界等。文章的结构较为合理，也很流畅。但是连接词使用的较少，可以适当添加。
考点：考察半开放性作文