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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last February, I was on holiday in Beijing with my family. One morning, I was sleeping soundly while I was woken up by a suddenly cry of my sister, “It’s snowing.” I got up quickly, dressed me and opened the window. Wow, I couldn’t believe in my eyes. Everything including trees, roofs and grass were covered with thick snow. In distance I saw lots of cars, like small white box, moving slowly on the road. I also saw some lovely birds flying happily in the snow. How a beautiful sight! I became exciting because I had never seen snow before. In no time, I ran out with my camera and take many photos to record my first experience of snow.


【小题1】While改成when
【小题2】suddenly改成sudden
【小题3】me改成myself
【小题4】去掉in
【小题5】were改成was
【小题6】in后面加the
【小题7】box改成boxes
【小题8】How改成what
【小题9】exciting改成excited
【小题10】take改成took

解析试题分析：文章介绍作者和家人到北京旅游，遇到人生中经历的第一次雪的事情。
【小题1】当我被姐姐的突然的叫喊吵醒的时候，我睡的很沉。While引导时间状语从句，表示一段时间，when引导时间状语从句表示时间点，因为被吵醒是时间点，所以用when
【小题2】suddenly是副词，修饰动词或形容词，这里修饰cry，用形容词sudden
【小题3】我赶紧起床，穿好衣服，打开窗户。Dress oneself穿衣服，me改成myself
【小题4】我不敢相信自己的眼睛。Believe是相信，believe in是“信任”，去掉in
【小题5】一切包括树，屋顶和草都是被厚厚的雪覆盖了。Everything 做主语，谓语是单数：were改成was
【小题6】在远处“in the distance”这是固定短语：in后面加the
【小题7】我看见很多汽车，就象白色的盒子在街上移动。指cars用复数：box改成boxes
【小题8】多么漂亮的景色。感叹句中How修饰形容词或副词，what修饰名词
【小题9】我很兴奋，因为我从没有看过雪。修饰人，用excited
【小题10】很快我带着照相机跑出去拍下我第一次下雪的经历。和ran并列用一般过去式：take改成took
考点：考查短文改错

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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从下面每句划线部分中选出错误的那个部分，并加以改正。
【小题1】My teacher advisedme that I solve the problem by the way．   
【小题2】Both of her sons joined inthe army two years ago.
【小题3】I can hard wait to goon my trip to France.
【小题4】I have been a friend of Mr White forlong time．
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___）, 并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:   1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改l0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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