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请结合材料,按要求用英文写作
Nowadays, many young people get addicted to playing their cellphones wherever they are, completely
ignoring their friends around.  
要求:
(1)就此材料发表你的感想;
(2)应紧扣材料,有明确的观点;
(3)在答题卡上作答,字数不少于60。

As is shown in a survey conducted recently, an increasing number of young people are currently abandoning themselves to their cellphone world, without caring about their friends nearby.
As far as I’m concerned, it is not advisable to behave this way and we should use the cellphone properly. Useful as the cellphone, it can by no means take the place of face-to face communication. Furthermore, it is absolutely impolite to keep playing with cellphone, ignoring our friends around.
Therefore, there is no denying that we are supposed to put our phones aside to enjoy a better social life with our friends.

这是一篇就一个社会现象,发表自己看法的议论文。首先审题:社会现象应用一般现在时表示。材料:Nowadays, many young people get addicted to playing their cellphones wherever they are, completely
ignoring their friends around.  现在,许多年轻人无论在哪里都沉迷于玩自己手机,完全无视他们身边的朋友。表明了作者对这种现象的基本态度----不赞成这样做。所以,组织短文时:
首先,用三段式写作。第一段简单介绍这种现象,引入话题。第二段说明自己的观点,并陈述原因。原因应尽可能具体、结合实际,同时注意行文前后逻辑合理。最后,换一种表达来表明自己的观点,起到画龙点睛的作用。
【亮点说明】
文章用三段式来分别说明1. 总玩手机忽视同伴的现象。2. 这种现象所造成的不良影响。3. 得出结论,明确观点。文中用到了conducted currently 做后置定语,ignoring our friends around, 做伴随状语, properly, absolutely, furthermore, therefore,高级词汇,by no means, abandon oneself to, take the place of. be supposed to do sth., put sth. aside 固定短语,as far as I am concerned, useful as the cellphone倒装句,there is no denying that, 等固定句型,使文章看起来层次分明,要点齐全,句式丰富,内容充实。
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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
No doubt the planet is warming. Over the last century, the temperature has risen by around one degree Fahrenheit. It’s reported that the global temperatures will rise  by 3-10 degrees Fahrenheit—enough to have the polar caps almost melted. If the ice caps melt, buildings, homes and even lives will be under water.
While we know about global warming,  what can we do to save the planet? The answer is simpler than supposed. You don’t have to go miles away to protest, or spend much money. Here are several simple steps to begin with.
Firstly, plant a tree.Trees , when fully grown, will keep the plante cooler.
Secondly, reduce pollution. Sometimes as simple as walking instead of taking the car will reduce pollution. Besides stop pollution, you are giving yourself exercise. So whenever you get into your car, just ask yourself, “do I have to make this journey by vehicle?”
When you get a little cold in winter, put a jumper on and don’t adjust the heating. The extra heat produced by homes also affect the planet.
Finally, reduce, reuse and recycle. Only buy what you need and reuse whatever you can, like containers and paper, and recycle what you cannot reuse.
If everyone stuck to these rules, we would be doing a great thing by protecting the Earth. It is our next generation that will feel the effects.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括这段短文的内容 ;
2. 然后以约120个词就“阻止全球变暖从我做起”进行议论,内容包括:
(1)全球变暖危及人类生存;
(2)阻止全球变暖要从小事做起;
(3)你的做法。
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 标题自定。
[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

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