假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Last summer holiday,I went to a summer camp,there I had some friends already. I did many interested things with these friends,having fUns. One day,I saw a boy,one I had previous known from one of my basketball teams. Stood by himself,he said, “I'm all alone." I happened to be a few feet from him and heard what he had said,but I went up to him and tapped him on shoulder. “We are not alone; I'm your Aiend”’ I said. Unfortunately,the boy didn't recognize me at first. It took him a while to figure out of that I was his teammate. Since then,though,we had hung out and become good friends.

1. . .. there I had some ... there →where

2. . .. many interested things ... interested→interesting

3. ….having firns. funs→fun

4. . .. had previous known... previous→previously

5. Stood by himself... Stood→Standing

6. . .. but I went up ... but→so / and

7. . .. him on shoulder. on 后加 the

8. We are not alone … We→You

9. …figure out of去掉 of

10. . .. we had hung out... had →have

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Every December 24,we used to hdad to my parents’ house and spend the night,along with my brother's family,and my sister's family. We’d eat lots of foods such as candies and my mom,s 1 chocolate cookies.

We'd play a card game for hours until one team proved 2 over all other sides. 3 , my sister Martie and I won,and when we had beaten every other 4 ,we'd sing and even dance. Yes,we were 5 . The kids always put out cookies and milk for Santa,and my dad would sit down and color a picture with his grandchildren to 6 it for Santa Claus. And then we'd 7 every person in the family to open just one 8 . After everything settled down,my father would read the story of Christmas, 9 us all of the true meaning of Christmas. Our Christmas Eves are a little 10 now as my parents have moved to heaven and my girls are in college,but December 24 is still 11 . Candies and my mom's favorite chocolate cookies are 12 our favorite foods. Martie and I still control card games,13 my daughter Ally and her boyfriend,Wesley,actually 14 us easily. We still open one gift that night. And,Martie's husband,Jan,has 15 the duty to read the Christmas story.

I can hardly wait for the 16 to come!It's my favorite time of a year because we’ re all 17. I’ 11 bet your family has wonderfiil holiday 18 ,too. Whatever your traditions are,I hope one of them is reading the story of Christmas. Why not teach your children the 19 meaning of Christmas this year? Because that's the 20 gift you could ever give them!

1. A. special B. homemade C. favorite D. fresh

2. A. helpful B. creative C. strong D. victorious

3. A. Usually B. Recently C. Immediately D. Hurriedly

4. A. sister B. brother C. team D. family

5. A. ftrnny B. happy C. free D. normal

6. A. open B. provide C. leave D. save

7. A. allow B. order C. beg D. force

8. A. box B. window C. case D. gift

9. A. convincing B. informing C. reminding D. warning

10. A. simple B. different C. meaningless D. strange

11. A. wonderful B. reasonable C. comfortable D. powerful

12. A. even B. rather C. already D. still

13. A. and B. or C. but D. as

14. A. find B. reach C. cheat D. beat

15. A. taken over B. thought about C. dealt with D. applied for

16. A. game B. night C. dinner D. day

17. A. alive B. healthy C. around D. together

18. A. traditions B. songs C. foods D. plans

19. A. clear B. only C. true D. hidden

20. A. best B. biggest C. most beautiful D. most expensive

For thousands of years,kites have been made and flowaby people of all ages.

A simple kite can be made with two crossed pieces of light wood 1. (glue) to a sheet of paper or plastic. Then all 2. is needed is a cloth tail for balance and a ball of cord(绳子) .

Most kite fans fly their kites just 3.fun,but serious kite fliers enter contests and tournaments. These events are conducted under the 4.(rule) of the International Kitefliers,Association. Kites are used for practical purposes,too. The US Weather Bureau uses kites 5.(gather) information about winds and weather. Some of the kites used in this work cany scientific instruments and fly 6. (high) than 20,000 feet.

The flat kite 7. (be) the simplest and most popular kite,and the box kite is another popular type. Another favorite kite looks something like a bird.

To launch a kite,it's 8. (usual) necessary to run into the wind for a few feet. As the kite begins to rise,let out more line and give 9. . some short tugs(猛拉) .

Do not fly a kite near trees or power lines. Also,you should not fly a kite in an area 10. there are low-flying aircraft.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

My friend Linda and I have set up small organization called Delivering Smiles with my mother. Linda and I do all of the work like collect toys and picture books. Before a month of collecting these things,my mother takes us to the hospital that she works as a nurse. When we take what we had collected to the hospital,my mother brings us to differently children's rooms. We let each child pick out of what they want. We sit in each room for about ten minute,talking to and playing with each child. When I give a little of my time for children in the hospital and when I see their smiles,we feel quite happy.

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

One day,my mother took me to a restaurant for a lunch. There was an old man,wearing an old army jacket,which obviously behaved strange. The waitress was not patient and insisted the man showed her his money after she took his order. When we were checking in,the old man was in front of us,paying his bill. My mother reached out and paid his bill. She told the waitress not judge a man by his clothes. Besides,she told the waitress everyone should show respects for the old. The waitress went red and making an apology to the old man. I was proud of my mother,who always told myself to do the right thing.

中国的家长大都“望子成龙”，而厦门大学的易中天教授则认为，父母应该“望子成人”，并提出了成人的标准——真实、善良、健康、快乐。请用英语写一篇短文发表在某英文论坛上,表明你对此问题的看法，并说明理由。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 短文须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。

简要描述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。

注意:词数100左右。

Love working with children? Looking for an exciting new opportunity? Want to work on a friendly,fun and supportive team? This is what our team member Anna says about working at My Creche:

“It's the nicest place I've ever worked. Everyone is so friendly and we have so much fun working together. They give me opportunities to learn new things every day. They care about my personal development. Working at My Creche has enabled me to build relationships with the children as well as parents within the community which makes me feel so welcomed in the local area."

Conveniently located in the heart of Crouch End,London,N8, My Creche offers drop-in and pre-booked childcare for children aged 6 weeks to 5 years of age. We also provide after-school and breakfast clubs for children up to 8 years old. Our goal is to enable parents to pursue personal and professional activities when they need to,with total peace of mind knowing their children are being cared for in a safe and fun environment.

We are looking for an enthusiastic and committed professional with excellent interpersonal skills,who is committed to ensuring the best outcomes and care for children. This is an excellent opportunity for a proactive individual to be a part of a fresh and progressive childcare concept and we wddome nbwly qualified professionals. We are a small and very supportive team with great training opportunities.

The successful candidate will:

. Have a certificate Level 3 in Childcare and Education.

. Have experience working with children.

. Be an excellent communicator with strong people skills.

. Be energetic and able to multi-task.

Salary: £16,500 — £19,000 per year depending on experience and qualifications.

Full time (flexible work available) and 28 days annual leave.

33. The author uses Anna's words mainly to .

A. examine B. inform

C. compare D. advertise

34. My Creche provides service to .

A. all children

B. children older than five

C. children under eight years old

D. children from five to eight years old

35. What does a successful candidate need?

A. A college degree.

B. A language certificate Level 3.

C. Great skills in communicating with people.

D. Years of working experience with children.

The guy who tried to edit English

The English vocabulary is not only huge,it's also fiill of words that mean practically the same thing. Get,obtain,acquire. Shine,gleam,glow,sparkle. 36

That was the thinking of a British writer named C. K. Ogden,who in the 1930s proposed(提议) a new form of English with a vocabulary of just 850 words. He called the project Basic English. 37

Ogden arrived at his 850-word list through experimentation,rephrasing texts over and over until he was satisfied. The words he finally included were not necessarily the shortest or most concrete. 38 Because any verbal idea could be expressed with a small number of “operators” — words like come,go, get,take,have,make,be, and do — Ogden argued that most verbs were unnecessary. In Basic English, eat is “have a meal." is “go from memory."

Winston Churchill was a fan of the concept as a way to get foreigners to speak English,and he encouraged the BBC to use it. 39 Roosevelt,who expressed mild interest,joked that Churchill's famous speech about offering his “blood,toil,tears,and sweat” to his country wouldn’t have been so exciting if he “had been able to offer the British people only blood,work,eye water,and face water,which I understand is the best that Basic English can do with five famous words."

40 Churchill didn't use it either. When seeking to express ourselves,we don't necessarily need fewer words; we need the right words. So it's to our benefit to have a large supply on hand.

A. Do we really need them all?

B. How many words are there in English?

C. Ogden himself didn't actually use Basic English.

D. Plenty of seemingly basic words did not make the list at all.

E. He also tried to persuade President Franklin Roosevelt to promote it.

F. He believed it would make the language more efficient and easier to learn.

G. Despite attention from world leaders,Basic English never got very far off the drawing board.

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