题目内容
4.1.简单描述图内容并说明所象征得社会问题.
2.你认为应该如何解决这一问题(至少两点)
注意:
1.可参照下面文章开头所给提示,作必要得发挥想象.
2.词数150左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数.
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名.
参考词汇:留守儿童 left-behind children
In the picture we can see bird parents fly away the big tree to find more food for their families. .
分析 高分句型:
句型一:
In many rural areas of China,parents go to big cities to do migrant jobs ①though their young children need their love and care②.在中国广大的农村地区,虽然年幼的孩子们需要父母们的爱和关怀,但他们还是去了大城市做了农民工.
①do migrant jobs:做农民工(的工作)
②此处为though引导的让步状语从句.
句型二:
Some struggle to keep up with①their lessons and end up dropping out ②to follow in the footsteps oftheir parents.有些人无法跟上他们的功课,最终辍学跟随了他们父母的脚步.
①keep up with意为:紧跟,跟上;
②end up doing sth.以…而告终,最终….
解答 In the picture we can see bird parents fly away from the big tree to find more food for their families,leaving their children behind at home.The small birds are lonely and sad in their empty nests.We can imagine the difficulty they will have living on their own.(概括图片的内容)
The picture actually reflects a social phenomenon.In many rural areas of China,parents go to big cities to do migrant jobs though their young children need their love and care.【高分句型一】As a result,new problems have arisen.Statistics show many children face psychological and emotional challenges.Some struggle to keep up with their lessons and end up dropping out to follow in the footsteps of their parents.【高分句型二】Some others form bad habits or even commit crimes.(联系实际,分析了留守儿童的产生及其引发的社会问题)
It's high time to solve these problems.First,the local government should create more job opportunities for these breadwinners.Second,teachers should give left-behind children more caring love by visiting their homes regularly.As middle school students,we can ask them to live together with us in our own homes.(提出解决问题的方法)
点评 本题提供的是图画,主要考查考生的观察力、思考力以及表达能力;因此要求考生应结合题目的要求,看懂了意思之后再进行写作;具体做法是:首先,根据图画内容整理出几个要点,再根据这些要点决定要采用的语言形式,包括确定文中的人称,时态以及选用相应的句式结构,并且还要写出自己的看法或感受.