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最近我校对高一学生入学一学期后的学习生活适应情况做了一个调查,情况如下。请你用英语表达下表的调查结果,并提出个人观点。
60%左右的学生认为
40%左右的学生认为
我的观点
1. 高中学习很有压力;
2. 科目难度大,课后作业多;
3. 没时间参加锻炼等活动
1. 适应并喜欢高中生活;
2. 课程更有趣,活动更丰富,受益匪浅。
……
要求:    1. 词数120;    2. 文章开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:course 课程
Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen has
become used to the life in senior high school. ­­                                
                                                                               
                                                                               

One possible version:
Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen has become used to the life in senior high school. As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 60% of the students in Senior 1 hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing. The reasons are as follows: Firstly the subjects they are learning now are obviously more different. Besides, they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities.
On the contrary, others say they have become used to the new life and have begun to enjoy it. They say that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful, which surely benefit them a lot.
As far as I’m concerned, we should balance our study and other activities and do everything effectively. Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better. 

试题分析:写好图表式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,写作首要分析用什么时态。本文要求写一个高一学生的学习生活适应情况调查,通常用一般现在时。有2个观点,用they做主语,和自己的看法用I做主语。注意用一些高级词汇和短语和以及较复杂的句式。开头的变化和句子的连贯性也很重要。最后还要注意字数的控制。
【亮点说明】本文分三段写出了高一学生的学习生活适应情况调查。第一段先概况用了whether引导的同位语从句说明survey的内容,结果As can be seen,是opinions are divided。多数学生认为压力大,文中用了Firstly, Besides列出2条原因。which引导的非限制性定语从句是亮点。接下来,用On the contrary,开头,提出另一个观点。become used to the new life and enjoy it。又用了一个which引导的非限制性定语从句。最后,As far as I’m concerned,提出个人观点。最后的Only in this way can we learn more and enjoy our life better.倒装句使用也很恰当有力。
考点::图表类作文。
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阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Once upon a time in a land far away, there was a wonderful old man who loved everything:animals, spiders, insects...
One day while walking through the woods the nice old man found a cocoon(茧)of a butterfly. He took it home. A few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it could go no farther.
Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon.
The butterfly then came out with ease.
But it had a swollen body and small, shriveled(萎缩的)wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly.
What the kind-hearted man did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were Nature's way of forcing fluid(液体)from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.
Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life. If we were allowed to go through our life without any hardships, it would fail us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. And we could never fly.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120个词就“个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺”的主题发表看法,至少包含以下内容要点:
(1)你读了这个故事的感受;
(2)叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果;
(3)假如你是父母的一方,你会如何磨砺自己的孩子?
【写作要求】
1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
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