Question

请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的事例，用英语写一篇短文。
　  Telling lies is what we are taught not to do, but in some cases, telling lies seems to be what we have to do.　
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
　　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；
　　　③内容必须结合生活或学习中的一个事例，写出真情实感。
　　　④文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；
　　　⑤词数不少于120字左右。
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   

Answer 1

With great importance attached to honesty, children are taught not to tell lies. However, there are occasions when we realize that telling lies seems to be the only choice.
My best friend Li Hua used to be rather poor in English, especially his terrible and strange pronunciation. Hardly could he make himself understood when speaking English. Bearing a heavy load in mind, he felt desperate and upset. He dared not speak English in class. When asked questions by our English teacher, he was always nervous and embarrassed. The classmates always made fun of him, saying that he was speaking Japanese! Once I met him in the corridor. Therefore I praised that his pronunciation was very special and kind of like Obama's. Believing what I said, he got greatly inspired. He spared no effort to practice speaking English every day.  Now, he can speak English fluently with a perfect accent.
Recently, he told me that it wasn't long before he knew that what I said just a little white lie but he appreciated it badly, without which, he said, he couldn't have achieved such great progress.

试题分析：本书面表达是一篇开放式作文，话题是“要不要说谎言？”，贴近考生实际生活，对既定的话题进行讨论，考生有一定的自由发挥空间，畅所欲言，各抒己见。写作的时候注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如attach to，be poor in，make oneself understood，make fun of, spare no effort to, long before, make great progress , achieve such great progress；并注意了句子的衔接如：however，when，once，before等等。there are occasions when we realize that telling lies seems to be the only choice.这句用了定语从句，Hardly could he make himself understood when speaking English.用了倒装句，Bearing a heavy load in mind, he felt desperate and upset.用了非谓语动词，Believing what I said, he got greatly inspired.用了名词性从句。