Question

14．假如你是李华，近年来很多大城市交通拥堵严重，影响了人们的生活和经济发展．请针对此现状用英语给某英语报社写封信，谈谈你的看法和建议．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear editor，
I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic．Nowadays，people in many big cities are complainingabout he heavy traffic．It has seriously influenced people's daily life and economic development．Tosolve the problem，I'd like to put forward some pieces of advice．
For one thing，more streets and roads should be built．In this way，we can speed up the flow of busesand cars．For another，the number ofbikes and cars can be limited，which can decrease the traffic flow．But the most important thing is that the number of private cars should be put under control．Meanwhile，buses should have their own special routes which can't be used by other vehicles．Besides，undergroundtrain and city train should be developed quickly．
I do hope my suggestions will be taken．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇书信类作文，要求给报社写一封信，主要要求有：1．交通现状及影响；2．提出改进建议；3．希望建议被采纳．需要注意的有：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
（高分句型一）the number of bikes and cars can be limited，which can decrease the traffic flow．
首先该句使用被动语态；which引导一个非限制性定语从句，which指代整个事情；
（高分句型二）But the most important thing is that the number of private cars should be put under control．
该句式使用that引导表语产品能根据，在从句中should be put是被动语态．
高级词汇：complain about 抱怨；influence影响； put forward 提出；speed up 加速；put under control控制；

解答 Dear editor，
       I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic．（我的看法） Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about he heavy traffic．It has seriously influenced people's daily life and economic development．To solve the problem，I'd like to put forward some pieces of advice．
   （列举我的建议） For one thing，more streets and roads should be built．In this way，we can speed up the flow of busesand cars．（第二条建议）For another，（高分句型一）the number of bikes and cars can be limited，which can decrease the traffic flow．（高分句型二）But the most important thing is that the number of private cars should be put under control．Meanwhile，buses should have their own special routes which can't be used by other vehicles．Besides，underground train and city train should be developed quickly．
       I do hope my suggestions will be taken．
                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                              Li Hua

点评 本文用了书信应该用的格式，用了一般现在时，将来时等的时态穿插．用了For one thing和For another等时间词汇，条理清楚的写出了各种要点，并且自己也写出了观点．