假定你是李华.你的好朋友Judy因考试发挥失常.导致成绩不理想而情绪低落．请你给他写封信表示安慰.要点如下:1)对她目前状况表示理解,2)建议她找出失常的原因并吸取教训,3)鼓励她树立信心.争取下次考出好成绩．注意:1)词数100左右,2)可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯,3)开头已给出.不计入总词数．Dear Judy. I'm s 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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9．假定你是李华，你的好朋友Judy因考试发挥失常，导致成绩不理想而情绪低落．请你给他写封信表示安慰，要点如下：
1）对她目前状况表示理解；
2）建议她找出失常的原因并吸取教训；
3）鼓励她树立信心，争取下次考出好成绩．
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3）开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Judy，
I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exam andthat you are depressed and worried about your study．I quite understand how you feel now．As your friend，I have some tips for you．
First of all，I want to say failure is the mother of success．So never give up though you failed this time．You should try to analyze the cause and draw a lesson from it．This can help you make up for the shorts of knowledge and skills in those areas．The next is to build up confidence．For it is the deciding factor to ideal grade．I am sure bydoing this your test results will be improved next time and gradually your confidence will also come back．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析（高分句型一）I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exam and that you are depressed and worried about your study．在表达难过的时候，使用了两个that引导的宾语从句，要注意第二个宾语从句引导词that不能省略；be depressed and worried 表示忧虑和担心；
（高分句型二）I am sure by doing this your test results will be improved next time and gradually your confidence will also come back．
该句型使用了被动语态，即your test results will be improved，你的测试成绩将得到提高；
高级词汇：depressed and worried 忧虑和担心；failure is the mother of success失败是成功之母；draw a lesson 得到一个教训；make up for弥补；build up confidence建立自信；

解答 Dear Judy，
（高分句型一）I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your exam and that you are depressed and worried about your study．（表达对她的理解之情）I quite understand how you feel now．As your friend，I have some tips for you．
（给出具体的建议）First of all，I want to say failure is the mother of success．So never give up though you failed this time．You should try to analyze the cause and draw a lesson from it．This can help you make up for the shorts of knowledge and skills in those areas．The next is to build up confidence．For it is the deciding factor to ideal grade．（高分句型二）I am sure by doing this your test results will be improved next time and gradually your confidence will also come back．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧

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20．He can speak veryfluent （流利的） English．

17．Attending （参加） the meeting is a great honor to him．

4．假定你是李华，几天前外教Joan离任回英国，你为她在网上购买了一套陶瓷茶具作为礼物．她来邮件说已收到，很喜欢，不过发现有个杯子破了．请回邮件表达歉意，并请她发照片过来，由你和商家联系补发．
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

14．假如你是李华，近年来很多大城市交通拥堵严重，影响了人们的生活和经济发展．请针对此现状用英语给某英语报社写封信，谈谈你的看法和建议．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear editor，
I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic．Nowadays，people in many big cities are complainingabout he heavy traffic．It has seriously influenced people's daily life and economic development．Tosolve the problem，I'd like to put forward some pieces of advice．
For one thing，more streets and roads should be built．In this way，we can speed up the flow of busesand cars．For another，the number ofbikes and cars can be limited，which can decrease the traffic flow．But the most important thing is that the number of private cars should be put under control．Meanwhile，buses should have their own special routes which can't be used by other vehicles．Besides，undergroundtrain and city train should be developed quickly．
I do hope my suggestions will be taken．
Yours，
Li Hua．

1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共
有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
It was cold and rainy．Stood at an uncovered bus stop，an old man didn't have a hat and an umbrella．Without thinking I stopped and give him the umbrella I carried with I．As a result，I was caught in a heavy rain．When I got to school，I became complete wet．
To my great happiness，all of my classmate felt admiration for me at the moment they knew about my kind act．It was not until then when I realized giving was joyful than I had thought．I will try my best to help those who are in need in the future．

18．Hermit crabs （寄居蟹） live their lives in temporary，second-hand accommodation．As the hermit crab grows，it must find a larger shell for （61）protection（protect）．If a shell is too small，the crab will not be able to move back fully into it and therefore becomes （62）aneasy target of its enemies．
Competition（63）forempty shells can be quite fierce among hermit crabs，especially if the supply is limited．Sometimes，however，the crabs form orderly"chains"，waiting patiently for some （64）hours（hour）to obtain a shell of the right size．
This process begins with a single hermit crab leaving its own shell（65）to inspect（inspect） a nearby empty shell for size．If the shell is too large，the crab will return to （66）its（it） own shell and wait close to the empty shell．As new crabs arrive，they repeat the inspection process．
If the new home （67）proves（prove） unsuitable，they will return to their shells to wait in a queue．
（68）Amazingly（amaze），the crabs order themselves in this waiting chain，（69）whichmay consist of up to 20 individuals，from the largest to the smallest!When a crab claims the empty shell，all the individuals in the queue quickly exchange their shells in order，each crab （70）moving（move） up to the next-sized shell!．

Patients trust health professionals as a source of advice on behavior change. However, many health professionals dodge giving advice on that. They find traditional behavior change strategies (方法) time-consuming to explain. Besides, it’s difficult for the patient to achieve. Furthermore, even when patients successfully start the recommended changes，the gains are often short-lived because few of the traditional behavior change strategies have built-in mecha-nisms for maintenance (保持).

Meanwhile, brief advice is usually based on advising patients on what to change and why (for example, reducing fat intake lo reduce the risk of heart attack). Psychologically, such advice can be followed only if conscious motivation is engaged. However, the effects are typically short-Jived because motivation and attention will decline. Brief advice on how to change, engaging automatic processes, may offer a valuable alternative with potential for long-term influence— habit.

Within psychology, we define “habits” as actions that are caused automatically in response to reminders. These reminders have been associated with performances. For example, automatically washing hands after using the toilet. Decades of psychological research consistently show that mere repetition of a simple action in a consistent context leads to the action being activated upon .following exposure to those contextual cues (环境暗示). Once starting of the action goes to outside reminders, dependence on conscious attention or motivational processes is reduced. Therefore habits are likely to remain even after conscious motivation or interest disappears.

1.Which word can best replace the underlined word “dodge” in Paragraph 1?

A. Risk. B. Avoid.

C. Appreciate. D. Admit.

2.What plays the key role in patients’ taking advice?

A. Reasons to change. B. Ways to change.

C. Increasing attention. D. Intended motivation.

3.What may help to keep habits after interest disappears?

A. Outside reminders. B. Mere repetition.

C. Conscious attention. D. Brief advice.

4.What is the passage mainly about?

A. Motivation to form habits. B. Conflicts between patients and professionals.

C. Habits to change behavior. D. Advice from professionals to patients.

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