Question

生活中困难不可避免，面对困难需要信心。假如你是李华，尝试举例说明信心在学习、考试、生活等方面的作用，并就面对困难的态度谈谈你的看法。
注意：
(1)可适当加入发挥，以使行文连贯;
(2)词数：100左右。

Answer 1

It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can find sometimes the question is not as “huge”as we imagine.
Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster. Accordingly, some people give up, some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!

解析试题分析：开放性作文只给出了一个话题，给考生自由发挥的余地很大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。本文的话题是明信心在学习、考试、生活等方面的作用。考生可以从自己的亲身经历中选择一个例子来说明如果没有了信心，就什么也没有了。所以我们一定要让自己在做任何事情的时候充满信心。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】本文中对于连接词的使用非常到位，如Accordingly, On the whole。另外在高级句式的选择上也有自己的特色，如 It is well-known that…中it作为形式主语，真正的主语是后面的that从句。文章的结尾很也有特点：And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!用否定词加强了语气。
考点：考察开放性作文