Question

【题目】为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假如你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求救信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活收到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。

内容要点如下：

1.表示理解并给予安慰； 2.提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3.信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。

参考词汇：temper脾气，情绪

Hi Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you are having such a bad time at the moment.___________________

___________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Jamie

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Worried,

I’m sorry to know that you are having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of these periods when things seem to go wrong, so you don’t worry so much. The important thing is learn to control your temper so that you may say or do anything you will regret. Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is the good way to let your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go out doors to play some team games with your friends as physical exercise is the effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful to lift your spirits.

I hope you will soon keep calmer and carry on as normal.

Yours,

Jamie

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求某中学英文报“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求救信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活收到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。要点包括：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了at the moment, go wrong, optimistic, positive等词汇及first, second, and third等连接词。