题目内容
19.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike即将完成学业,不久前来信就是否到中国工作询问你的意见.请根据以下提示回一封电子邮件:1.建议他可以来中国;
2.阐述你的理由(就业机会多、专业受欢迎、不同的文化体验等);
3.承诺可提供帮助.
注意:1.词数:120-150;
2.文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Mike.
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week.___________________
____________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料信息,写一封电子邮件,给即将完成学业的英国笔友Mike是否到中国工作提供意见.写作要点:1.建议他可以来中国;2.阐述理由;3.承诺可提供帮助.
写作时人称以第一人称和第二人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主.
重要短语:received the letter (收到来信),think about(考虑),from one's point of view (某人认为),choose to (选择做某事),offer quantities of job opportunities(提供大量就业机会),be badly needed (非常需要),as amatter of fact (实际上),hope to do (希望做某事),adapt to …(适应),wait for(等待).
【高分句型】
1.I have been thinking about the question you asked me.
这里是定语从句,先行词是the question,定语从句中you 为主语,谓语为asked 宾语为me,缺少另一宾语,省略了关系代词that或which.
2.China is a country with so many different cultures and traditions from the west that many foreigners enjoy living and working here.
句子有"so+many+名词复数+that+从句"结构,意为"如此…,以致于…".
3.what you are studying is badly needed in China.
这里是由what引导的主语从句,整个句子的谓语动词是is,badly needed in China为表语部分,主语为what you are studying,what在主句中作宾语.
解答 Dear Mike,
I'm very happy to have received the letter you sent me last week.I have beenthinking about the question you asked me.【高分句型】From my pointof view,you can choose to come to China after finishing your studies for thefollowing reasons.(建议他可以来中国)
For one reason,Chinadevelopment over the past 30 years offers quantities of job opportunities forthe young.What's more,what you are studying is badly needed in China.【高分句型】As a matter of fact,many big companies in our cityare hoping to hire people like you.
For another reason,Chinais a country with so many different cultures and traditions from the west thatmany foreigners enjoy living and working here.【高分句型】I am sure you will adapt to the environment quicklyand enjoy your stay here.(阐述理由)
If you come,I will do what I can to help you.Sowhat are you waiting for?(承诺可提供帮助)
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.
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