Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim 即将来中国旅游。他对中文名字非常感兴趣，并且很想拥有一个中文名字，他向你求助。现请你给他写一封信，包括以下内容:

1. 介绍中文名字的特点；

2. 给他取一个中文名字并给出理由。

注意:

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不要出现真实姓名。

Dear Jim,

I’m very glad to hear that you will come to visit China.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m very glad to hear that you will come to visit China. There is no doubt that a Chinese name will help you better fit in with the culture in our country.

A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters, which often carry some special significance or expectations. Unlike an English name, the family name is usually put first. And then a given name follows. As you are kind, smart and energetic, I thing Li Yang is most suitable for you. The family name is one of those shared by the largest number of Chinese. The given name means the sun in China.

I hope you will like your new name and have a really good time in China.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 介绍中文名字的特点；2. 给他取一个中文名字并给出理由。第二，人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三，时态为一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，很高兴听说Jim要来中国，介绍拥有中国名字的重要性。第二段，1. 介绍中文名字的特点；2. 给他取一个中文名字并给出理由。第三段，表达希望。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: culture，share, mean energetic, characters，significance， expectations，kind, smart energetic, fit in with, consists of ,the family name, given name ,be suitable for。

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:that引导的同位语从句There is no doubt that a Chinese name will help you better fit in with the culture in our country. which引导的非限制性定语从句 A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters, which often carry some special significance or expectations. As 引导的原因状语从句As you are kind, smart and energetic, I thing Li Yang is most suitable for you。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:however，besides，then。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。