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央视时空调查栏目针对目前我国现行的高考填报志愿的三种形式作了一个网上调查,调查的结果如下,你作为一名即将参加高考的考生,请简要的描述调查的结果,并谈一谈你对此事的看法并说明你的理由。

注意: 1. 150词左右,文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当添加细节以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:填报志愿 choose one’s major or university   
According to a survey carried out by Horizon Research, _______________________________
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One possible version:
According to a survey carried out by Horizon research, Chinese senior high school students have different opinions on when to choose their majors or universities. Among the 1,874 students who participate in the survey, most students,about 82%,insist that the choices should be based on their scores after examinations. In their opinions, they can choose their ideal majors and universities according to their scores.12% of the students, however, believe that the choices should be made directly after the examinations. And there are still 6% of the students holding the idea that the choice should be carried out before exams.
Personally, I would rather choose my favorite major and university after knowing the exact test score. Having known the test score,we can make a proper choice. Yet the other two will add up more blindness . When we make our choices. In addition, if the choices are made before exams, it may bring anxiety during the exams, which of course will have negative effects on our performances in the exams.

解析试题分析:本文是篇图表作文。考生在写作之前必须认真读图分析含义。要求你作为即将参加高考的考生对目前我国现行的高考填报志愿的三种形式所作的一个网上调查结果进行简要的描述 ,并谈一谈你对此事的看法并说明你的理由。首先确定文章的时态,要求是描述调查结果,和个人看法及理由,应该用一般现在时。人称注意变化。还应该注意句子的复杂性和衔接,以提高作文的档次。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如 according to, participate in,in one’s opinion, be based on,have effects on等,还运用了 非谓语动词做状语; which引导的非限制性定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如:however,In addition,等等。
考点:图表作文。

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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders. A study shows that whenever the employment rate increases by 1%, the death rate decreases correspondingly(相应地) by 2%. All this comes down to one point: work is helpful to health.
Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy. Work serves as a bridge between man and reality. By work, people come into contact with each other. By collective activities, they find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to health. The loss of work means the loss of everything. It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease.
Besides, work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. Work makes one feel his value and status in society. When a writer finishes his writing or a teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyond words.
[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2.然后以约120个词就“努力学习,快乐生活”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:
(1)你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗?简要阐述理由。
(2)举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的?
(3)简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活?
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]  概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

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